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Darkness fills the room,
As the door closes with a quiet boom,
And my sleeping soul awakens.
Energetic as can be,
ready to kill whatever challenges it.
Comes toward me and bows,
as if she knows i have a quest for her.
I walk back to the bed where she rose,
and touch the smooth velvet sheets
in wonder.
She approches me once again,
waiting for her quest.
I stare and slowly turn to face her.
the words come off my lips like blood pouring
from a wound,saying,
"Bring me the spirit of 'him.'"
Her face twists in doubt and worry that she might fail me,
but with a gentle bow,she dissapears to her job,
leaving me in the dark.
As she arrives at 'his' home,
she begins to realize she is strong,
for he is meek.
She comes up and touches him softly,
ready to speak.
She whispers to him;"I am here to take you to peace and sanity."
He is confused now.
She makes him walk with her to a dark, bloody, empty room.
He looks at her and says"What doeseth this be?"
She tells him"Dont worry,this will get better."
She lays him in the middle of the diamond carving in the floor,
and rises with her dagger trembling in her hand.
He stares in fear, not knowing what shes gonna do,
And shivers.
She tells him,"This is only for your good."
He gulps,and closes his eyes saying,"I'm ready."
She takes a deep breath,and forces herself to throw herself to the ground,
plunging the dagger into his heart.
Blood goes eveywhere.
She breathes again,glad it's over.
Watching his spirit rise from the bloody pool.
She returns back to me,and I am enthralled to see,
my lover,Jeremiah.
We come together again in joy,
And we finally float to heaven.
My soul following.
- by AndNothingElseMatters |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/02/2008 |
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- Title: Immortalized
- Artist: AndNothingElseMatters
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Description:
This is what I Wrote During My Sleep.
Hope It Makes You Think.
Look I know you think i'm wierd for writing it,
but,hell,im emo,so get over it. - Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: immortalized death fear
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Comments (7 Comments)
- melissa101__m-n-m - 08/17/2009
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i love this but cant read!!!!!!!!!!
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- Colour Me Burlesque - 07/19/2009
- This was beautiful. I actually started to cry when I read this, because it was so sad and touching. -Kneels at your feet- I shall now serve you for as long as you live.
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- misamisa602150 - 07/18/2009
- wow ari thats really deep eek i never knew that you could be that deep...5/5
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- Bounty Girl22 - 04/13/2009
- this is cool i can go with it.:]
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- Ari100 - 04/07/2009
- this is soooo good i cant wait for ur next poem!
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- xxMeLtEd-HeArTxx - 04/01/2009
- i love this poem. i can sooo relate.
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- MeIanite - 03/15/2009
- I like it, but I just think that it's a little wierd how you had to kill in order to get into heaven; if i am correct in my understanding about that place you don't necessarily get in by violence. Other than that I'd say it's good but not great. 3/5
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