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You don't know how,
Misery begins.
It stays with you,
Until the end.
Sorrow, agony and fear,
Will flood.
So wipe away,
Those tears of blood.
You'll be forgiven,
After all the killings,
For the lies you're saying,
And the life you're faking.
You're dead!
It doesn't matter,
How much you've been,
screaming and pleading.
Nobody cares.
God can't hear your prayers!
You're dead,
With two shots to the back of the head.
Do you remember dying?
All the pain and suffering?
Do you see yourself crying?
Or were you laughing?
Oh how wrong we were to think that immortality meant never dying...
- by DiexToxSurvive |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/02/2008 |
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- Title: how wrong we were
- Artist: DiexToxSurvive
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Description:
this poem will start up a conversation.im warning u its dark and noone will agree with it...anyways this poem was inspired by the lyrics of "Heaven Help Us" by My Chemical Romance and several other by them too.
plz no harsh comments - Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: death blood explicit
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Comments (7 Comments)
- HalfHorizonOfHope - 06/12/2009
- That's good! I can definately tell where you used lines from some of MCR's songs, all put together with new lines to create something new!
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- babygurl2795 - 11/17/2008
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oohh... your poems r good risu... i like the last sentence... >8D
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- kitkatkitty11 - 11/06/2008
- Hello! Good poem!
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- QueenxofxSekyd - 11/02/2008
- its good. makes me curious about wut event inspired ur writing of it...
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- musicbyme - 11/02/2008
- a little harsh but i like it its very good
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- rayne482 - 11/02/2008
- I like it. It is very well written. I could almost see it as a song.
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