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love pain heartace why do i feel u so" i wondered as i walked though the dark night. at the time i fell out with my girl vicky and her word's still hert as i think of them but my troubles didnt start there ill take u on a jerny of when my life changed for the worst it was two weeks ago i was walkin to school with sam and lee my two mates who i meet during half turm. "so nick who u gonna take to the halloween dance?" asked sam. "beleave it or not i dont realy know who im gonna ask" i replied looking at my shoes as i walked. "nick try askin vicky i know what u think when u look at her hips" lee whispered in mine and sam's ears."I DO NOT LOOK AT HER HIPS!!" i shouted. sodenly i saw her vicky her long red hair blow in the wind her uniform higgin her slim body tightly. vicky started to walk over to us with her older sister. "hey guys " vicky said cheerfuly "hey vicky" sam and lee replyed but i stayed silent. "so who's ur cute friend" vicky asked sam as she said that i started blush. sam turned to me "oh him he's nick i think u meet him last weekend" sam replied. i carried on lookin at my feet as i walked and i slaped sam at the bak of his head "what do u mean by he's nick" i said moodily. sam smiled soon after we got to the school. i couldnt be bothered with the lessons so i walked to the tree i usily sleep in when im skippin lessons after ten minuets i climbed up it and lied down on a sterdy branch and fell asleep.
after twenty minuets i woke up to a terrible noise it sonded like twenty nails beeing scratched down a black board. i quickly jumped out of the tree and landed on my behind. i quickly ran inside the school and saw sam beatin up 2 of the year 11 boys. i ran over to him "hey leave some fon to me" i said smilling at sam. me and sam ran at the 2 boys with our fists clenched.we jumped into the air and forced our fists to conect to the top of there heads knockin out the 2 boys. we both smiled at each outher and busted out laughting "so i guest u herd my screach" sam wondered". "err yeah how couldnt i of herd that" i replied. after 7 hours of school i walked home and saw a shodow like figure standing in frount of me "are u nick" asked the mastirous figure. i staired at him wonderin who he was "yeah im nick who wants to know" i replied. he started to walk to me and as he got closer a large shape sprouted out of his back. the shape started to take form and black feathers started to from arond him. "i am the angel alicar ur protector" said the figure. i looked at him puzzled "err my protector what do u mean" i asked courosly. "ur the angel of darkness the angel aramus" alicar replied
he reached out his hand and put it on my sholder and black featherd wings sprouted from my bak. my uniform changed to a dark skin tight sleaveless top and black skin tight jeans. my hair changed from my short black hair to a long dark purpal coloured hair. "what have u done to me" i hissed at alicar i looked at my wings and grined and spreaded my wings. i jumped into the air and flew soon after i blanked out. when i woke up i fond my in my self in my room "it must of been a dream"i muttered to myself. i put on my uniform and started to walk to school with sam and lee. "hey guys wait up said a voice behind us" said a voice behind us. it turned round to see vicky running to up to us when she corght up to us she started to talk to sam and lee "did u guys herd of that winged guy on the news" asked vicky "yh i did" said sam "what was his name now" said lee as they were talkin i started thinkin about last night
"nick what do u think about that winged guy" asked vicky i looked at her "err i donno but i.... i think u look beautiful this morning" i said blushing. she started to smile ind walked up to me "so u think i look beautiful i think that was away of askin me out " she whisperd in my ear. she put he hand on her chest and kissed me on my cheek and walked on.
i noticed lee as i was walking down the street then i herd aramus talking to me in my mind " hes a angle god damit i thorght i killed him" i looked at lee confustion "what there more angles aramus more like me" i asked aramus with telekanises but there was no reply. i muttered to my self " aramus your no help" continued to walk lookin at vickys hips then lee walked up to me and whispered in my ear "i knew u looked at her hips" i looked at him "what i wasnt lookin at ther hip i swear" i replyed"
i ran off away from the school i quickly turened into my angel form and flew away from lee. "so what his angel called aramus"i asked soon after "his angel is the keeper of light but i only know him as the angle of light" i looked surprised when he said the name "what u know the tail of angel of light" asked aramus "yh my family told me about the 4 angels when i was a young boy and how they hated each over" i replyed after 10 hours of landed on a large building and fell asleep soon as it hit night i senced 2 beings with alot of power fighting near buy i grow my wings and my clouthes changed to a tight black outfit "i guest we better see what those powers are" i said to aramus thoght my mind i got up and flew to the location. i landed on a tall flag pole and saw ayala and a strange new angle fighting. "seramus" aramus shouted in my mind "whos seramus" asked "the angle of time the 1 who kinda destroyed atlantes" he explaned. all of a soden alicar apeared "nick i want u to split the fight up just use the shadow flair" asked alicar i rased my hand and a dark ball of energy apeared i shouted "SHADOW FLARE" and frow it between the 2 angels they both looked up and saw me automaticly a large sword apeared in my hand i looked at it and aramus cuntroled my body my voice deepened "angle of light do u remeber me" shouted aramus i smiled as he went bak into my soal
alicar teliported next to ayala "ur still aint got the right idea for this garidian angel stuff have u my young friend" alicar said grinning like a cheshur cat. i quickly jumped off the pole landing behind lee and wispered in his ear "i do not look at her hip". i quickly smiled and grabed his wings and trow 2 him into the air i rased my hand and a dark fire ball apeared "shadow flare" i quickly trow it at seramus forcin him to the ground. i quickly looked up at lee before he sent a ball of light at me. as the ball of light was flying at me i jumped in the air and flow at lee with my sword of shadows in my hand. i quickly swong my sword knocking the ball of light into the air. "come on light lee u are realy gettin weak" i shouted at lee i worped behind lee and grabed him by his arms "shadow blaze" i shouted and a large amount of dark energy apeared around us. lee cryed out the words "solar bomb" and a large amount of light bursted out of his wings sending me bak. he smiled at me and flow towards me grabin my head. he quickly frow me into the air "u wont beat me nick" lee said. he used 1 of his mighty powers and lifted up a bolder with his mind and sent it right at me. i flow towards the bolder and slamed my head onto it making it shatter. "i gues i have no chois but to use this but here i go" i said to my self i put my to hands together ands my eyes started to glow white darkness started to wrap around my body slowly turing me into a shadow. i went down towards lee and grabed his wings i roared as lould as i could and sent a dark energy blast from my wings into his back. sending lee flying down to the ground with speed i quikly turned bak to normal but with only my wings out i quickly flow off to vickys house and stood onto her balcany next to her room. i tapped her window and she opened the door "its u the angel guy" said vicky. "i prefer the name aramus" i said back smileing
icouldnt help but stair into vickys blue eyes that reflected the moon light. she quickly looked at me " u look like some 1 i know but 1 thing have we met befor? do i know u?" she said to me i quickly hesitated "err ur look beautiful today" and as soon as i came to the balcany i flow off with out her saying any thing in return a few minuets later i flew to a near buy shop and brourght my self a can of coke. the shop clerk staired at my wings he pouinted his finger at me ande shouted "i..i...it's the angel its the angel from the news" soudenly his family came running down. before i could get away 2 children grabed my wings. i sighed and looked at them "excuse me im not a play thing can u let go" i said i walked out and rased my wings with ease. i jumped into the air and a force of air hit the ground making a thud sound.as i got high enouth i flew to a near buy building and sat on the roof sodenly alicar apeared "u made me proud to day nicku defeated the angle of light as well as the angel of timeplus i saw u gettin pritty close to that vicky girl" he said with pride in his voice. "oh shut yup alicar" i muttered with embarasment in my voice.
to be continued
- by awesomesauce 29 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/11/2008 |
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- Title: the angle of darkness
- Artist: awesomesauce 29
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Description:
my story from my jornal not finished yet but read what u can
this is a story of a young boy and how he finds out that he has a dark being imprisoned inside him the angel of darkness this story is a fantacy with a moden twist.
sorry about the use of text messageing language. - Date: 12/11/2008
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Comments (1 Comments)
- xXxDaBugabooxXx - 12/19/2008
- Its a pretty nice little story there but you have WAY to many errors that at times I couldnt understand what you ment or didn't mean but I liked it 3/5
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