Red

• Artist: Crimson-Cravenheart
• Description: This is the first paragraph of a story I've been writing, I'll say no more of it because I don't want to influence anyone's comment
• Date: 10/03/2008
• Tags: aglaia calliope deimos

They call me Aglaia Calliope Deimos; and though I may sound Greek in origin I am far from it. I hold no nationality, and this name is merely one of many I have acquired over the millenia. However, if you like you may call me Khaya; I have always preffered it to the others. It is such a shame this name has been forgotten.

A human looking upon me would call me a demon, but what you humans fail to comprehend is that I am beyond all conventional terms. To call me demon humours them, they are so easily flattered, and insults me. No, instead I have found that the closest explanation of my being is this: as elementals are governers of the elements, I govern Red and all that it adheres to- the colour itself, the emotions, the symbolism. I am every shade, each drop of lust, every single spark. I am fire, anger, destruction, war, passion, heat, love, blood, and more. I am Red. But your species is far too young to truly appreciate it.

Comments

[Always Fear Amber]

wonderful ^_^ you simply must post more =D
im just going to guess, are you from england, or do you just like to spell color, 'colour'?

[Religious Concubine]

Your word use is infallible and I have no doubt that you yourself will one day become a benefactor to modern literature. If you at some point come out with published work I'd very much like to be the first to know. Please, by all means, 'keep it up.'

[yUkHi]

Beautiful introductory I must say but it is clearly in the wrong section. It should be categorized in the fiction section not the non-fiction. Just letting you know.

[myshatteredlittleheart]

it looks like u did some very good over shadowing with what my come to happen and what it might be about

[Kai The Ark Angel]

it sounds like a great story i really like even though im not a writer myself but this was good 5/5