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One night in the Gorges Pass, a small village off the Falamein Moutains, a light went out at 1929 Plum St. In the house across the street, Rose Conner looked out the window. She heard a couple of crashes and screams issue out of the house then it exploded! Blown back from the window, Rose didn't see the dark figure step out of the house carrying twin babies.
The figure was a man named Xaviar Fireball. He was Around 5'0 had dark wavy hair and dark skin. The man took out A Two-way radio and turned a couple of knobs. A Smooth voice buzzed in sounding very mechanical.
"Yeah This Is Drago Speak!" The Voice Said. The that came from Xaviar was so full of secret meaning and darkness that it made the children cry: "I've got the children. Tyrone and olivia. The Light and dark children."
- by Sinful Meaning |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: In The Light Of Darkness.
- Artist: Sinful Meaning
- Description: It's Not Completed. It's Really Like Part The First Chapter :XD Buut i edited it and took out some parts, parts too innapropriate for childern XD. Hope You Like it!
- Date: 07/18/2008
- Tags: darknesslight
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Comments (5 Comments)
- asdfadsfsdgha - 02/12/2009
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WOW I LOVE IT
you are a writer at work
i just need an ending to it - Report As Spam
- Sillmarillion - 01/10/2009
- well, it really needs some work, trust me, coming from a submitted author, you need a way better intro, the setting was really nice, but you needed some more explenations and descriptive words.
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- Lightblue1208 - 11/18/2008
- it iis really good and u should check ur spelling and grammar. -lightblue1208
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- Lightblue1208 - 11/18/2008
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it is good u should wrote bout it. -lightblue1208
P.S check your spelling and grammar. - Report As Spam
- Broken Resistance - 07/18/2008
- cool so far bro
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