true friends

• Artist: omg404
• Description: this is a thing i decided to write it is about true friends & what it means to be a true good person which is also written on my profile plz rate!
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: friends great person

ok, not all of u who read this so if u would please read on.

never let go. a friend who never lets go is a true friend so if U really care u will never let go of that friend either. never ever, ever dis a great friend even if they did something really horrible. if it even seems u may never forgive them u know u will. all my friends are kind hearted & care for me. if u r ever dissed or hurt by a friend. that is no friend. a friend is a person who is always there for u & will always help u in times of need. whenever u see someone being dissed or called ugly names even if u don't know them, stand up & help. that is the type of thing that shows u r a considerate & care for the kind hearted people, not the cruel & evil kind. on my friends list there r many, many people who i care for & who care back for me. take my best friend in Gaia, nobalsky & my best friend in real life boomboomariana, they are always there for me in times of need & when i can i try to help them in return. when u see a good deed like someone helping a person in need think to yourself "that's who i want to be" & try to help & u shall be loved all around the gaia world & real life. and in turn u will have a happy life & like in the commercial each time u do something great u make a new friend & if u keep making friends u will know everybody in the world! so live on my readers & make a great person of yourself!

Comments

[IIShadowPandaII]

completly opisite of my freind sad i guess shes a foe

[8 tailed snake miu]

wow this is great i went through something where i had to figure out who was friend or foe so this really reminded me of that time....although it bought back memories i didnt want -_-'' but still very good

[IconicRaven]

I agree with Xuiv, not writing in chat speak would greatly improve this piece. Also, I would suggest formatting it, as in paragraphs and such.

Other than that, it was fairly good. A little editing would do it wonders. 4/5.

[I_wuv_u_nots]

i give it a 5/5 it do good ^-^

[omg404]

hmmm..... then i will edit it

[Xuiv]

I would've enjoyed reading it more if you had written it out instead of using chatspeak.