- I run into the forest with fear in my eyes. I am running away from something..... something too terrible for any of our souls to discover. Once I recited that spell, I knew there was no going back. I just didnt want to know the outcome of it. The truth was enough for me; I didnt want to picture it in my mind. I was almost out of breath. I felt like my lungs could rip right out of my chest. My black, long straight hair blowing in the wind. As I run closer to the abandoned house, I notice something. Something was shining right in one of my little brown eyes,sticking right out of the dirt. It was a shiny green emerald ring. I knew who had left it behind. The thought of him and I in my recent memories was enough to make me cry. My tears rolled down my precious cheek that he used to lay a kiss upon. I knew it was Chris. Once I started remembering his perfect green eyes, I started running again. I couldn't take it anymore. Then I arrived at the house. It was dark and gloomy looking. The house was built in 1901 so this house was even lucky it was still up. It looked like it belonged to a vampire. Then it hit me. Could it be? I wondered. That the spell didnt work because possibly Chris was a vampire? I gasped. It all connects. The unbelievable beauty of his face, how he made me feel important every day, and his extra-ordinary personality. This was Chris's house. It couldn't be. I couldn't find the right words to put in my mind. Then the door swung open. I knew who it was. Except he wasn't the man i once knew and loved. Now that I knew everything, he has changed. I had to turn around. Once I did, I stared at him till I knew I was gonna pass out. I looked away. It was him. Chris. Except this time, his eyes were golden; no longer green. "Jenevieve" he says slowly. I dont turn around. "Please, we can be together. I know we can. We have just got to find a way befo-". Then something else can rushing in the door. It was something ugly. So devilish that i pratically fainted. But then I saw him. Enough for me to see him being tooken away by that monster. "Chris!" I shrieked. But he was gone. Then I blacked out.
- by winterwolf0017 |
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- | Submitted on 12/22/2010 |
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- Title: Sight
- Artist: winterwolf0017
- Description: I play Jenevieve; a young girl who has found the secrets to making monsters and spells. She ran away from home and is running away from the demon who is trying to kill her(aka, not Chris). So once she found out that Chris, the man who she fell in love with and loves her back, was a vampire, she struggles with some other business of her own. So she strives to find memories and tokens of her past to make her remember what she once had..... This involves romance and gore. I hope u guys like it :)
- Date: 12/22/2010
- Tags: sight
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Hope_Kagome - 08/22/2011
- some of the adjectives and verb usage was confusing or didn't flow but still pretty good smile
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- Rose-kingdom-of-love - 03/11/2011
- Can u write more? Its very interesting smile
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- Mockingjay1414 - 01/09/2011
- it sounds really interesting but i think u made an error because ' tooken' should be ' taken' but apart from that it's good smile
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