Electric 1.8

• Artist: Robotic Purple
• Description: Ok first of all this is a SEIRYS as in there is more then one part to this story hense the 1.19. if you dont under stand it try reading it from the BEGINING!
• Date: 09/20/2010
• Tags: electric

My grandmas crazy driving had to be one of the most terfying things in the world. almost scaryer then spiders, and i HATE spiders. She would slam on the gas and brake, slam on the gas and brake. i swear to god she shouldnt be driving, shes gonna kill someone. she finaly parked on the side of the road doing what i think was spose to be aparralel park, but she was up on the curb and the car was poking out onto the road. We stepped out and she just began shuffling down the side walk of some down town strip mall, we walked into a little antique shop.
ok i know this is a short ity bit peice but i have something important to do. ill finish this tomaro, sorry.

Comments

[Robotic Purple]

had** other ones**

[Robotic Purple]

this is a part of a bigger seirys, i just couldnt finish this one because i had to go somewere. you have to read all of the in order for it to all make any sence.

[Mistress of the Samurai]

I think you need a Beta to read your works if you're going to submit them to the arena.
I'd be happy to offer my services to correct your spelling and grammar.