- Jens heart constricts and her eyes sting with tears. She knows this is the end and that she’ll never see him again the one she loves the one she is meant to be with. She feels the blade on her throat and closes her tear filled eyes. She whispers I love you on last time hoping he’ll hear her but she thinks he can’t. The blade slowly cuts her throat and the pain causes her to scream and with her last dying breath she says his name “Josh” and she slowly falls to the ground and dies. While they make him watch the whole time. He screams and screams but its useless he knows she is gone. His head falls forward in defeat and a tear slowly falls down his cheek. He waits for them to kill him but he feels no blade instead his bands are cut and he is free. He looks up but no one’s there only her lifeless body. He crawls over to her and cradles her in his arms he bends over and begins to cry when it starts to rain he doesn’t even notice he just sits there looking into her lifeless eyes wishing there was something he could have done. A few minutes later he slowly rises. He clenches his hands into fist and squeeze so hard his nails slice through his skin. Right then he swore to get revenge on the people who killed her and will stop at nothing until there all dead.
- by StolenAnima |
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- | Submitted on 04/27/2010 |
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- Title: revenge
- Artist: StolenAnima
- Description: this is the begginning of the book im writeing want more leave a comment
- Date: 04/27/2010
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- Candle Shadows - 06/13/2013
- It has potential. But there is a need for more imagery in this part. Also, read through and check for grammar and parallelism mistakes before posting it. 3/5
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