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Bloody Rose
In the dark night, a girl in a maiden uniform with a white apron on carrying a 9mm pistol started running. A howling angel started flying, brewing from the night sky.
The maiden was frightened as she turned and fired her gun at the angel, she sliced her with his chainsaw.
“AHH!”. He woke up in a frightning way.
The boy was taking a deep breath and went back to sleep. Suddenly his brother came and woke him up.
“Rise and shine Dan” His brother said.
Dan got up, got changed and fixed up his black hair. He wore black gloves which were like good luck charms. He packed his things and walked off as he shut the door.
A few minutes later he looked up at the sky and wondered to himself..
“what kind of dream was that?”
He was kind of pale. He went to take a drink, as he started drinking he heard the other students saying that a horrific murder occurred in Alama Draft which was located in America.
“A murder huh? Guess he wasn’t lucky” He said to himself.
Dan felt this odd feeling in his heart which was pumping hard.
For a few hours later school was almost finished, Dan went out to take anotehr drink but he suddenly bu,ped into a man in black coat.
“Oh sorry about that”. He apologised.
The man said nothing as he kept walking.
Dan felt confused but it didn’t matter to him.
He felt vored, and didn’t want to go back to class. He went to the toilets and wanted to do this thing that he hasn’t done for a long time.
He putted on a bra, whtie gloves, maiden uniform wit ha long sleeve onto it, an apron head and then he putted on the apron.
He used an eye liner, and shaded his eye lids, he putted on a bit of make up and fixed up his hair.
“Alright I’m back again!”. He yelled. Dan ran out of the school and got onto a bus.
“So…. Where to now?”. He questioned to himself.
Dan wanted to go to Cabramatta station to meet with up his friends at some convention.
But up at the sky something was odd about it. A car blew up for some reason. He looked up from the window and saw something being threw down onto the car engine.
The bus stopped, everyone was running for their lives!
Dan got off the bus and see whats going on as people running passing him by.
But then a spear was threwd down onto Dan. He dodged it by stepping back but then when it was threwed down, he tripped over.
“What the hell?!” He questionally yelled.
The man spoed
“Princess Rose…” He glared
“Princess?!”
Dan got up and grabbed the spear which was on the ground
“I don’t know whats this about, but I’m going to stop you here even if it means with my life!” He screamed as he ran towards him.
The man with wings grabbed his spear as he pushed it back and made him flew away to a car. He was hurt badly as Dan tried to get back up.
“I’m not done with you yet!” He yelled at him
The man started to seak again as he said to him “Meet me in America and we’ll settle it there”. As he wallked away, he vanished in thin air. Dan was hurt badly and he closed his eyes.
It was 8:50pm, Dan wooked up in a strange room. It was all coloured in white, the bed was all in red with a love heart heart, Dan was wearing a strange red dress with straps on his legs, it had a mini-skirt.
“What the hell am I wearing?” He questioned to himself.
A door was opened, as a women in a maiden uniform walked in with a tray of food.
“Are you feeling better today?” The Maiden spoked.
“Umm…. Who are you exactly? And where am i? And why am I wearing this dress?” He asked
“Oh I knew you would ask, My name is Died Morgan, I am the masters maiden, you are in Mr Yuiji Motosuwa’s mansion, oh and that dress your wearing was masters orders.
Died Answered respectfully.
“But I’m a guy” Dan answered back
“Oh but you do have talent disguising as a girl, my master thinkied it was quite, well… cute”. She truthully answered
Dan felt shy and embarassed.
He looked down on the food and sees a cup of tea, with chocolate cake.
He grabbde the fork and took a piece. “Thank you…” He silently said.
“Please follow me, my master is waiting for you.”
Dan said nothing and got up as he followed Died to the masters office.
A few minites there, Dan took a deep breath and stepped in with the maid.
“He is here as you requested Master.” She respectfully bowed
“Ahh… Dan Thanh Nguyen age, 13, born in January 7th 1997, favourite/hobbies Anime, poetry.,,, drawing, writing and cosplays.”
The master stopped
“How did-“
“We were watching you for the whole time Dan” Motosuwa interrupted.
Dan didn’t talk anymore as he just standed there.
“You want to know why you’re here right?” Motosuwa asked
Dan nodded as he wanted to hear him why he was here
“The reason why you’re here is because you have a personality of a princess, not in that way, whenever you put your makeup on or work on your hair you have an image of her, even so you are also part of her, her soul is with in you Dan, or should I say Princess Rose?”
“What?!” Hey I’m a guy!”
“Then why are you dressed as a girl then?”
“Well ahh…”
Dan couldn’t speak anymore.
“Please Princess Rose, you are the only one who could stop this outrage” Motosuwa asked Dan to join him, to stop this man who was brewing around these murders.
He handed him photos of the victims who were killed, one of them survived though.
“So what is this guy anyway?” Dan questioned.
“This man you see here which you confronted is an angel”. He answered
“An angel?” And I ghought heaven doesn’t exist, so what do I do then? Rip out his wings and then kill him?”
Motosuwa nodded.
“That’s why I we want you in this case, go to America, a girl will help you in this case.
He grabbed his cup of tea and slowly dranked it.
“Oh and Dan, we prepared some new things for you, that maiden dress you had there, we changed it, please wear it”
“My… dress?”.
Died brang Dan back to his room, as they were there the dress was standing. He walked towards it and puts it on, it had a half sleeve which reached up to his elbowes from her hands, there were long stockings and lever shoes. She were an apron on, and placed a white hat on his head which was shaped like an apron, there was a watch as he place it on his left wrist.
“Feels comfy, but does the skirt has to be half short? Its like I’m wearing a bloody mini-skirt!” Dan yelled.
“It was ordered by Master Motosuwa”
Died answered.
He felt like the guy was a pervert freak but although it suited him very well. He looked at his watch, it was 9:30 pm.
Dan couldn’t say anything. As they went in a lemo they drove off to the airport and got onto the plane.
Finally as they were there they tooked a taxi as they find a hotel
“So when do I meet this girl?” Dan asked
“Tomorrow morning, we should get some rest”
Died turned off the lights and finally they went to sleep.
Dan was hurling around rolling over on his bed.
“you are a Princess who will stop this outrage, will you fight me or will you watch seeing humanity being killed?”
“AHH!” Dan woked up.
“Oh your awake” Died said
“yeah… nad dream that’s all”
“I’ve prepared breakfast, eat it, you want your energy”
Died placed a plate of bacon and egg on the table in front of Dan.
“Aren’t you eating Died?” He asked
“Don’t worry, I’m not really much of an eater” She walked off and clsoed the door
As Dan finished eating he washed his plate and got dressed in his maiden uniform and placed mate-up in his face. He looked in the mirrow and looked at himself, he did funny poses then stopped. He went outside and saw Died out there.
“Ahh… I see you already finished eating, how was it?” Died asked
“Oh it aws good, thanks Died” He replied respectfully.
“That’s good lets begin our investigation but before that let us meet Hakuru Sakura”
“Hakuru Sakura?” He questioned.
They went in Dieds car and head to a school which was college.
“We are here Dan”
“Sweet School man!” He enjoyfully looked and stared at the school.
They hopped off out of the car car and walked at the school. As soon as they got there they finally reached up to Hakuru’s room.
“When you start to meet her shes well lets say a bit unwelcoming.”
He didn’t even care if she wasn’t unwelcoming he just wanted to finish this and head back home.
Died opened the door as they see her in black clothing with short length black hair and with gloves a** he reads as newspaper.
“Hello Hakuru enjoying your day?” Died asked.
“Who in the hell are you?” Hakuru rudely replied.
“My name is Died Morgan and this here is Dan Nguyen, We’re here on an investigation.”
Died replied back.
“And is that the reason why you’re here? To get me in this “Investigation?”
She said
“You “did” confrtoned these angels before haven’t you? Hakuru Sakura”
She asked
“That’s because I was their enemy, I’m a demon now okay? The half of Hakuru’s soul was gone last month, she wanted this so I could be free from my chains.”
She answered back at her
“Hey look I’m not much of a believer and stuff but come on, help us, if Died said it was true then why won’t you help us? Dan yelled.
“That’s because I gave up as a Gunner and givened up!”
She yelled back at him.
Dan said nothing now and so did she.
“I’m sorry, we should be going now…”
They left as Dan looked back at her as she leans on the table with her eyes closed.
When they were outside Dan kept asking “So does this mean we’re on our own?” As they walked.
“Yes I believe so Dan, Master Motosuwa found some evidence on the angel man, unfortunately, these murders weren’t him who did it” She answered.
“So your meaning his not alone?” He asked
“I believe so” Died said.
But then so suddenly Hakuru came outside running.
“Wait!” She said
“I’ll come… I thinked a lot lately” She said to them
“Then please come inside.” She welcomes her in the lemo and droved off as they got in.
A few minutes later when they were speaking and talking about the investigation, Dan looked at Hakuru’s red eyes as they were glowing.
“Hmph… Angels can be pretty stupid these days, they just don’t know whats right and wrong” She said to herself.
“So all we just have to do is rip this guys wings and that’s it right?”
He questioned at Hakuru.
“Yeah but even so its better that we kill him after that” She answered to him.
He said nothing but to look at his drink.
A few hours later as they got off they went to an abandoned warehouse which hasn’t been demoilished for ten years.
“I can smell him, his in there, this guy doesn’t leave any clues for us, he makes us follow him” She said.
“I think he wants me Hakuru” dan said to her.
“Why’s that? Oh yeah whats with the outfit?” She said.
“Don’t ask…. Anyways lets just go in….”
The three walked in with caution as Hakuru broked down the barricaded door.
“Stay behind me, Angels can attack at anytime, and even so they can come out of nowhere”
They stand behind Hakuru as she had her gun ready. They looked around but hear no sound.
Suddenly an axe was thrown at them. She quickly fired her gun at the axe and hits on the floor, suddenly a bunch of ghouls came.
“Ah hell! It was a trap! Get out of here!” She yelled at them and jumped out of the door.
As they did she threw a grenade at the door and exploded as they were finally safe.
“So the guy just put freaking Angel Dust eh?”
Hakuru said.
“Hey I thought you said Angels were stupid and dumb” Dan said.
“That’s what I thought but this one was too smart”””””
She told him.
“So what do we do now?” He said
“Wait his connecting into me… I think I now know where he is” She told them.
“Then lets go!” He said
They drove to some abandoned church which was left for five years. As they reached there Dan felt pain in his heart.
“AHH!” Dan painfully yelled.
“Are you alright Dan?” Died asked.
“Yeah I’m fine” He answered.
“Alright lets go in, stand behind me” Hakuru said.
She knocked down the door and saw the man with white feathered angel wings on his back, with white long hair, a chest of armour plate. He holded a long blade, two axes attached both of the side of his waist and looked back at them.
“Ahh…. Hakuru Sakura, the gods really do hate you don’t they?” He said to her.
“Gods my butt Mr.Angel I don’t care, they’re more evil than Satan” She yelled.
“Oh and I see Princess Rose I see” He said.
“That’s Dan your referring to” He said to her.
“Anyways lets finish this!” Hakuru yelled.
She ran towards him and kicked him straight to his jaw but then suddenly it had no effect.
He grabbed her leg and threw her to the ground.
“Hive it up, I am an instrument of god! Come now Princess and we shall rule the world!” She screamed.
“Sorry not interested” He yelled!
He grabbed a spear as she ran up, she slammed the spear on the floor and jumped up and kick him as he slammed onto a cross.
“His still getting back up…” Dan said to her.
“I’ll rip his wings off, then you go for the kill.” She told him.
“No I’ll do it, that guy actually wanted me badly, if he wants a princess then it should be me” He told her.
“Okay then, try not to get hurt” She said.
“The Angel standed back up again and flared at Hakuru. He threw an axe and his blades then finally came with the chainsaw.
She bounced those attacks off as Dan went hiding then finally as the chainsaw was on the floor he grabbed it, turned it on and cut off his wings off.
“No! you haven’t seen anything yet!” He yelled.
His chest unleashed a powerful force with demons, in a matter of seconds it could go around the globe and destroy humanity itself.
Dan went up to him and grabs him onto the shoulders.
“Come on! What are you waiting for?! Grab that chainsaw and finish him off! I don’t care what happens to me just do it!” He screamed.
She understood him and grabbed the chainsaw. She ran up to him and stabbed through him, and to Dan.
Dan splatted out blood as the blood started gashing out on the floor. The man died as he turned to dust. Died and Hakuru went up to Dan as he was on the ground.
“Dan let me help, I can heal you” She said.
“No… I wanted this, let it be, besides I never knew dying would be this funny.” He coughed out blood and started to laugh.
“:et me rest here, oh and thanks for coming with us Hakuru” She said to her.
“We won’t forget you Dan” She holded his hand and finally he closed his eyes and dies in the sunlight.
Hakuru placed a rose on his hand as he still wears the maiden dress.
“He really does look like a girl and a princess…” She told her.
“Of course, he does… always”.
The skies kept shing as Dans body rests beneath the skies.
The next day, back at the Motosuwa mansion Died has given her masters report of the investigation.
The murders were not the angel however he turned humans into ghouls to make them do all his work. He only led the three into a trap but however it failed. The angel was located at a church but it was a success in killing him however Dan did not survive.
It is 7.00 am, in the morning. Hakuru went back to college, as Died head back home to the mansion. Dans body was now rested in the church.
The angel never left any clues for the three as the investigation was an easy task. He only wanted Dan the Princess Rose, We could only remember what honour and bravery he did for us.
The End
- by Hakuru-san |
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- | Submitted on 03/27/2010 |
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- Title: Bloody Rose
- Artist: Hakuru-san
- Description: this work was actually my school work, i thought i might post it its pretty long i did 23 pages in my eng book and had 20/20
- Date: 03/27/2010
- Tags: bloody rose
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Syla Delaney - 04/06/2010
- Its interesting. 3/5
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- Hakuru-san - 03/28/2010
- meh you'll get use to it
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- Wild Dragon Pokemon - 03/27/2010
- very good. : P u made a lot of grammer misteaks though. i also had a little bit of a hard time telling who was saying what, but other than that, very good.
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