- You left me alone about a block away from my house with a box of chocolates you got me for Valentines Day. You said we could no longer be together for it was to dangerous, that people would be after me if we kept seeing each other. So as i was heading home only about 200 ft away from my house, people attacked me. i tried to fight back and i wondered if these were the people who you seemed so scared would find me. They tore my dress and hurt me. you left me alone to walk home, if you were so scared of these strange people why didn't you walk me the whole way to my house? , tears were running freely down my face i was scared and when i got into the house i closed the door and feel to my knees and cried i prayed you be safe. but the next day there was an article in the paper saying that you were murdered and it said about my attack as well, you warned me and i live because of you, and now i can't hold the tears completely back. i fell to my knees and kept reading the article over and over. i held the box of chocolates close to my heart and cried and wondered why did you save me, you could have lived and let me die, but instead you saved me then i realized you did it because you loved me.
- by mandy_2143 |
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- | Submitted on 03/13/2010 |
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- Title: left alone
- Artist: mandy_2143
- Description: This is about a girl who lost her boyfriend after being attacked by someone who was trying to catch and kill him, and they got her but didn't kill her just hurt her very badly emotionally and physically. her boyfriend loved her enough to let her go and die to keep her safe from death.
- Date: 03/13/2010
- Tags: left alone
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- mandy_2143 - 03/13/2010
- i got bored on day and just stated typing about a girl losing her boyfriend, don't get me wrong i think its okay but not the best. comment any encouraging thoughts on how to make it better.
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