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Wide-eyed Alec looked around. The warriors had given him his own tent, which apparently had belonged to someone who "went out on the marsh at night".
He wasn't amazingly impressed.
All there was in the tent was a bed, that had a horsehair-stuffed mattress and a sheepskin blanket, a small table with a candle on, and a map on the floor. Nothing electric or plumbing, not even a toilet. Still, it was somewhere to stay so he tried to look happy about it. "Thanks, umm, Alice?"
"Yes. My name is Alice, and I run this band of warriors. Now, if you're going to stay here, you listen to me. You do what I do. Ok?" She seemed very stern and bossy to Alec.
"Fine..." He muttered "But, one thing. Going to the toilet..."
"Outside. There's a hole in the ground over to the west that leads down into the marsh. Right then, get up tomorrow at dawn, and I'll get you sorted with all the rules and training we do." And she walked out, not waiting for an answer. Sighing, Alec lay down on the bed, pulled the sheepskin blanket over him, and slept.
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- | Submitted on 03/08/2010 |
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- Title: Invincible - Chapter 3
- Artist: fdfdsdfdfdsa
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Description:
Finally! Writer's block for... 2 weeks now? T_T
Alec is very shocked by how the warriors live, being a technology lover.
This isn't a very action-y chapter, and isn't an essential towards the story.
P.S. After the next chapter I'll be releasing a catch-up with chapters prologue-4 in it :) - Date: 03/08/2010
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Comments (6 Comments)
- fdfdsdfdfdsa - 03/17/2010
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I think it's the best chapter yet. Definitely very emotive at the end, I think.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=102042083#title - chapter 4 - Report As Spam
- breathing_is_not_allowed - 03/16/2010
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Well, good thing you're putting out a new chapter soon. The wait would drive me crazy.
*crosses fingers* Oh please, don't let Alec die for too long. - Report As Spam
- fdfdsdfdfdsa - 03/16/2010
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Ahhhh, but considering the stories based around him he doesn't die.
Not permanently anyway...
Today or Tomorrow is the next chapter hopefully. - Report As Spam
- breathing_is_not_allowed - 03/15/2010
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HE DIES IN THE NEXT CHAPTER?! :'(
Yes,I'm very confused. - Report As Spam
- fdfdsdfdfdsa - 03/14/2010
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Yes poor Alec
Especially as he dies in the next chapter XD
Confused? - Report As Spam
- breathing_is_not_allowed - 03/14/2010
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I can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm sure it's very awkward for Alec. Poor Alec. - Report As Spam