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cold kisses chapter 1 blissful pain
i thought that this was going to be like every other day i was dead wrong.
I was walking through the woods trying to get my mind off the things going on.
then suddenly there was a rush of cold air. Then i saw a man walking towards me.
That was the only thing even remotely human about him was the way he appeared.
he looked like a granite Greek god statue he was beautiful. In the most
breathtaking voice he said i have been watching you
.
i said oh really why would you want to watch me i asked. he replied in that
voice like a angel because your such a beautiful and interesting creature.
wow this gorgeous whatever he was thought i was beautiful. then he smiled
and i saw his teeth, he had fangs at least 2 inches long. His eyes were a
bright shocking silver. then suddenly i had the urge to kiss him. he leaned
in and i followed. our lips met perfectly and his followed mine like a mirror.
It was so intoxicating. He sighed and i copied him. Then he moved his lips
down my neck and i shivered with delight. This man or boy or whatever he
was, was gorgeous and was making me excited i had never felt this way
before. He was kissing my neck and i wrapped my arms around his neck
and hugged him tighter to me. He didn't resist he came willingly he was so
close to me it made my heart pound just thinking about it. Then he ran his
hands down my side and i shivered with delight again i wanted him to keep
going. He moved his soft lips across my neck and then he bit me. it stung
but it was amazing. Then he started sucking the place he just bit. i didn't
know what he was doing but it was blissfully painful. He wrapped his had in
my hair and kept one on my side. Then i suddenly felt a surge of pain at my
neck. i didn't scream because i didn't
care.
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i let him continue and the pain worsened. It felt like a flame wrapping around
my neck and my body eating away the flesh. i didn't scream because in
away it was blissful. this may be odd but even though that little voice in my
head was screaming at the top of its lungs danger,danger i let him
keep going. The suddenly my vision faded and i couldn't see at all i was in
complete darkness. i wasn't afraid of it though. i was use to darkness, it was
my companion. i felt him, or it holding me and i relaxed i went limp. despite
the pain i was feeling i felt at peace. i completely gave in. the amazing thing
was he didn't try to hurt me or anything like that he just kept on doing what
he was doing. i had no idea what was happening and that he actually was
hurting me in a way, i was completely absorbed.
Then i cant clearly rember what happen next just that i sort of passed out.
For what seemed like the longest time i was in such pain. My flesh feeling
as if it was being ripped of my body slowly peace by peace. i found that i
wanted to scream but couldn't. it wasn't blissful anymore and i couldn't feel
him holding me anymore. i was frightened. what was happening to me.
Then slowly but surely the pain was fading as if someone was putting out
the fire. moment by moment i relaxed a little more until i felt another pain,
but this was only in my throat. it was a burning worse then the pain i had felt
before, it felt like i was eating the fire. I needed water i needed something
cold. But i still couldn't open my eyes.
- by XxKitty_of_DeathxX |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/16/2009 |
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- Title: Cold Kissess
- Artist: XxKitty_of_DeathxX
- Description: this is a story i made up of how i became a vampire. i worked really hard on it i hope you like it oh BTW the names are weird because u will find out they are in different languages. this is what i love to do. also if you want more there is more in my journal. please comment
- Date: 12/16/2009
- Tags: cold kissess vampire
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Comments (5 Comments)
- XxKitty_of_DeathxX - 12/22/2009
- i maybe but i wrote this before i read twilight im sorry that i proved you wrong ^.^
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- XxSilver_ButterflyxX - 12/16/2009
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try make up ur own thing. not copy from twilight
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- Confessor-Rose - 12/16/2009
- this is kinda like twilight. i mean the granite go and the fire in you?
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