- we were all sitting the van on our way to the haunted house brian and pete were in the two back seats jimmy was driving danni was in the way back by alyssa and i was by jimmy in the passanger seat everyone was drinking but me and jim cuz he was driving and i was smart we arrived and surprizingly no one was really drunk yet we got or tickets and waited in line finely we go in jimmy was leading and then was alyssa then me then brian then danni and lastly was peter "kill brian kill brian" i yelled and all the haunted house people were saying " brian briiian" i laughed then this lady was like "wheres my child have yo seen my child" she yelled then i told here i killed it then the fun was over and we went to a hooters brian got a girlfriend peter got slapped and jimmy only looked at alyssa and told here she should dress like that i had wings then we went to jimmys and slept over then we all woke up at 5 to help milk the cows then jimmy cleaned the pipe out and set all that up i made pre wash and alyssa took out the michines brians new girlfriend came over and he was busy with that alyssa and pete did the milking, jimmy watched i washed and danni just iodined then something bad happed peter got kicked in fore head he was nocked on his but and didnt know who we were where he was or who he was. blood was everywhere danni was freaking out the most we sped to the hostpital they siad he would be ok but we got him presents so he would feel better and that was the scariest thing i have ever seen in my life.
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- Title: my big scare
- Artist: absoluately_UNPREDICTABLE
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Description:
a 19 year old farmer named jimmy and a 19 year old redneck named brian and his little sister stevie whos 12 going on 13 and a ninteen year old boy named peter or pete have a have a good time this includes jimmys girlfriend alyssa and petes girlfriend danni. then theres the accident
*stevie is narrating the story* - Date: 10/29/2009
- Tags: scare
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- Rebecca Lockheart - 11/17/2009
- This sucked. There's NO punctuation, no real plot, and it's a terribly stupid story anyways. You suck at writting. Find another hobby, seriously.
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