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The story your about to read is about a young boy who longs for an adventure and is childhood friend, who enter a world where there are two suns, a normal sun that sets every day, and an emerald sun that only rises 1 every year and stays up for 5 days, now the boy and his friend need to save the world in 5 days or else they wont be able to go home, and now it is time for our story to begin.
It was a warm, summer day, but not any ordinary day, this was the first day off summer vacation, and inside the school, young Manfred Moss, eagerly stared at the clock, waiting for the last minute off school to end. “Come on bell, ring!” many said as he stared at the clock. The clock hand was about to move, so the teacher got up and said to the class “dear students, as the summer goes by, rember to keep what you learned, and further more…” she was saying till a student interrupted her “um teach, can I say something?” the student asked “ok sure what is it?” the bell rang and then the student shouted “SCHOOLS OUT!!!” all the students started shouting as they got out of there desks the teacher began to talk again “ok students class…” she was saying until she saw all the students running out the door, and some were jumping out the window “…dismissed.”
The students all ran out of the school, except for many, who was sitting on the steps of the school, waiting for his friend. Eventually, a young school girl walked out of the school, it was manny’s friend Emily leou. “Manny, are you ready to take the raft?” Emily asked with a happy expression. Manny looked up at Emily and smiled back at her and said “ok, lets go down to the river and lets go to that cave we found.” With that word, both Emily and Manny went down to the river and found there raft untouched. “Good, its still here, come on!” Emily said as both of them got on the raft, unhitched it from the tree it was attached to, and started to ride down the river. Many looked ahead and said “man… I hope there’s something cool in that cave” Emily looked at manny and replied “sure there is, rember no one has gone in there yet, so if there’s treasure in there, were gonna be the first to find it!” manny smiled until they approached the cave, quickly, manny and emily pulled out these sticks they found that looked like ores, and quickly paddled there way into the cave. As they got in, the cave gave off a sudden luminous glow. Emily’s eyes sparkled as she said “wow! Look at the gems on the wall, there giving off a beautiful green glow!” she continued to stare at it until they reached a room in the cave that was a dead end manny sat on the raft feeling disappointed “this is it?” he said “this is all that’s here in the cave?” suddenly, the room lit up and there was an altar in the middle of the room. “Emily” manny said to her “keep the raft steady, I’m gonna check what’s up there. When manny got up to the altar, a voice boomed out of nowhere and it said “young manny, your heart seeks adventure, you feel that your life is boring, if it is adventure you seek, then be prepaired, your about to go on the adventure of your life.” The voice ended, then suddenly the altar began to sink, manny being aware of it, he jumped off the sinking altar back on the raft. Soon everything was still and manny broke the scilence as he said “well… that was aqward” then suddenly a whirl pool formed in the middle of the room, and it began to suck emily and manny in. “WAHH! WHATS GOING ON?!?!?” emily shouted as the raft began to spin around the room, manny grabed emily tightly and said to her “HOLD ON! DON’T LET GO OF THE RAFT!” as manny and emily approached the center of the whirl pool, they both began to scream at the top of their lungs. When the both of them where completely swallowed up by the whirl pool, the water began still, and the glow of the cave slowly faded away.
- Title: Emerald dream chapter1 Manny
- Artist: AgentCJA
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the characters i based off of this chapter are listed below
manny- me
emily- bassed off of my good friend jessica - Date: 08/15/2009
- Tags: emerald dream
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- black widdow king - 08/16/2009
- good but you have spelling and grammar errors
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