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Ch. 10
As we left our small table to find the guys, I heard a split second of what my father and Mr. Chane's.
"You know the-" Georger whispered.
"Shhh. Not in public." My father ordered.
Then my father rushed George, practically carrying him by the elbow around a corner and disappearing out of sight. Who was George going to mention to my father? What was it about?
"Christina?? Still with us?" Sophie asks.
"Oh! Yes. Sorry what were u saying?" I stuttered.
"We were guessing where the fellows went. Where do you think they are?" Danielle questions.
"Um...how about right in front of us?" I pointed to the guys in front of us.
"What? That's absurd."Ashely yelled. Then her eye's followed where I was pointing to and blushed.
"It's okay." I pat her shoulder. As Danielle, Ashely,and Bridgete all go by my brothers' side's. I notice Michael is a little frazzled and ponder. I decided that I will ask him later tonight.
"So where are we going next? Should we get mother? What about father?" I blurted out.
"One question at a time." Everyone chimes...I blush.
"A club." Charlie says.
"No she's fine. Chatting up a storm probably." Carl says.
"He disappeared. Like always." Michael mummers.
" A club?! What about I.D.'s?" I ask. Like a nerd.
"Of course it's for vampires." Ashley says.
"BUT! Some humans who are friends with vampires." Danielle says.
"What kind of club is it?" I ask.
"Well basically it has levels and its underground." Mark pronounces.
"Huh?" I'm soo confused.
"The lower you go, the louder it gets and the dancing gets..well crazier. Level 1 is for people to get ready and prepare them selves. Level 2 is drinks. Level 3, 4, 5 and 6 are for different types of dancing." He continues.
"Wait! How many levels are there ex-actually?"
"Hmm.. oh! Um. I believe 12. So as I was saying Level 7 is for servants of vampires. It lets them take a load of for a short while. Level 8 is for humans and vampire friends. Level 9 more drinks in case you're to lazy to go up or ran out of your drink. Level 10 is for..um" He coughs" The vampires that only like vampires and thinks of human as..never mind. Level 11 are for the vampires looking for "A good time with other vampires. Finally, allll the way down under ground. Level 12, used only for feeding." He finishes, with accomplishment displayed on his face.
"Wow!" By the time he finishes we're already in front of a building, that is so short compared to the other abandon buildings. The difference between the buildings and this one,is that the one in front of us looks used, but unkempt.
We walk in and we encounter a zombie looking guy waiting by the elevator.
"What floor?" He says zombie-like as we walk in.
"Level 2 please." Tim recommends.
"Drinks first. Good choice." Ashley comments.
"Actually lets got to Level 7." John says.
"We're never going to get anywhere arguing about this." I say. Standing in the elevator I can sense that no one really planned what we were all going to do. So I look around seeing Michael,John, Tim, Carl, Charlie, Bridgete, Ashley, Danielle, and everyone else I can tell we aren't going to come to a decision.
"Level 7, please." I make the choice.
As we keep going down , I noticed something.
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- Title: Changes 10
- Artist: weirdfreak1243r
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New place and curiosity rises.
I just realized that i've been spelling Christina wrong so for now on it's going to be spelled
'Christina' and not 'Christnia'. Oh btw if any of you noticed that i changed Tim's name to Tom by accident sorry. It's back to Tim. I think i've made a lot of mistakes because i havent reread them at all. I will and then fix everything as i continue writing. So again sorry for the MANY MANY mistakes! - Date: 08/13/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- weirdfreak1243r - 09/27/2009
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Ill try my best.
Ill make a mental note to check them <3
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- invisibleninja159 - 09/27/2009
- yes thnx u have made a lot of mistakes and like you said plz read it over and fix the grammar mistakes and sometimes when i read a sentence it doesnt make since of the sentance is a sentence fragment which means you dont complete the whole sentence...besides that..oh wait! and plz add more time with Michael and Christina alone....plz! and thank you!!
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- tune1199 - 08/14/2009
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ooooooo!!!
YAY!!
post more! - Report As Spam