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Angelica smiled softly her long brown hair tied back into a ponytail wearing her fishnet top and black leather miniskirt she was going to the prom with Daric Skullings the foreign exchange student and her new boyfriend, he was wearing a classic black dress suit with white powedered shirt strait out of a old romance movie.
She felt bad for her ex Johnathen but he was too possessive of her esspecially around Daric, so tonight she was going to forget about it and have fun with her date.
The music was blaring and a mosh pit was starting to form angelica had high hopes until the music suddenly shifted to tango at which her hopes went from high to sky rocketing as she saw Daric coming back to her from the D.J. stand. He extended his hand in invitation like a gentlemen from england back before the american colanys ever existed her heart was beating at dubble pase already she took his hand and joined him, he took her into his arms his pail skin almost glowing next to hers in the dimly lit gym he took her through every motion perfectly leading like he had been born to dance to this vary song he spun he out to arms length only for her to catch a climpse of Johnathen fumming by the punch bowl and by taken back Darics dancing was perfect his moves gentle and guiding but it felt to her not as something of love but rather controll as she came to meet him she met his eyes the black orbs so intence as if boring into her she felt dizzy as she always did when meeting his gaze.
She leaned back a bit the room was spinning even if she was not and then one thing became clear to her in the haze a pair of glistening white fangs lunging at her everything went black she felt the pointed teeth start to puncture her neck the brutally shift away she fell to the ground the scene now clear their was Johnathen trading dukes with Daric what was happening?and why was her neck bleeding she wondered...
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ok that was the sample horrific I know sorry
- by hyena_of_leisure |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/11/2009 |
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- Title: dance with a vampire
- Artist: hyena_of_leisure
- Description: ok this is not a full story it is kinda a sneek peek to a book Im writing that will most likely never be published...anyways its ment to be a triology of the same book by the three main characters different perspectives so here is the peek at the female leads dance
- Date: 08/11/2009
- Tags: dance with vampire
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Metallithrasha - 08/12/2009
- It's a good start I think it could turn into something good.
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- aphrodite1424 - 08/11/2009
- I liked it. just need to fix spelling and stuff. biggrin
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- Porcelain Pierrot - 08/11/2009
- It's not horrific, you just need more punctuation! The only thing you have in there is a single question mark. D:
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