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The rain started to build on the streets. You could say it was a good thing for there couldn't be a longer drought than this. But, why today? It just made it all the harder to run!
I ran as fast as my feet would carry me (which was not that fast since i am not athletic) I struggled as the rain soaked my clothes, dragging me down. I knew the police where far behind but I didn't want to risk my life just now. I ran towards a forest, even though i hate bugs, i wouldnt mind if they saved my life! Leaping past trees I headed for shelter. The cold air stung my lungs as my run gradually became a walk, my eyes started to close. I fell to my side and every thing turned black.
I woke to the noise of chirpping birds and buzzing bugs. The suns rays shone through the trees like light reflecting off a crystal. Slowly I crawled to my knees. How did I get here? I wondered. The ground was damp and cold from all the rain. I finally took in the scenery and gasped. I'm in the middle of a forest in the middle of no where....!
- Title: The escape to no where
- Artist: dessunya
- Description: This is the preview...i dont know if i should write more...?
- Date: 07/13/2009
- Tags: escape where
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Mystical Temptress - 03/02/2010
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more!! more lol I love a good story, I wanna know what happens next.
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- Vintage Dreams - 01/19/2010
- Not bad! I just think this is a bit vague, as this can turn into a romance, horror, etc. Overall though, it's good!
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- dessunya - 07/17/2009
- thanks i don't really practice a lot...
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- demistriss - 07/16/2009
- keep writing XD 5/5
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- Azrael Xavan - 07/14/2009
- you should write more. ive never read anything like this! and trust me, i read a lot.
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