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There was a boy. He loved heart a gal .That gal work in a CD shop. The boy go to her shop daily and get a CD daily . He got there just to see her and he was not having any work wid CD, but he could not say her the truth. One day a news came the boy was dead. The gal ran to his house and get to his room
and started crying .
SHE WAS CRYING BECAUSE she the boy hasn't opened any CD yet and she hides her love letter inside the CD
so moral of the story is if you like someone don't wait him/her to come 2 u get on him/her
- by No OnE KnOw mEh |
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- | Submitted on 07/13/2009 |
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- Title: A Story of a Couple
- Artist: No OnE KnOw mEh
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- Date: 07/13/2009
- Tags: story couple
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Princess of Darkness 365 - 07/14/2009
- ignore her, it was a sweet, but sad story. i liked it alot
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- Sugar Quill Drops - 07/13/2009
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The writing is very poor, as is the grammar. The lack of punctuation, however, is very high. The moral is there yes, but you need to work on your writing conventions. I was having trouble focusing on your story, and not getting distracted by the spelling and grammar.
2/5 stars. - Report As Spam
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