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What? Where am I?
I looked around the shaded room with my sleep encrusted eyes. I felt a weight on my stomach. I snapped my head towards my feet and saw a box laying right above my bladder. i sat up and weighed the suprise in my hands. it wasnt very large, nor small. There was a small note on the top. i wanted some information before i did anything else. The note said the familiar name at the top: A gift from Jude. I slid my trembling finger underneath the card and dragged it along the bottom. A postcard fell out. I grabbed it and threw the envelope across the room, happy to hear that it had landed near or in a garbage can. The back of the postcard read:
Dear Prudence,
The only reason your room looks different is because i shut the blinds when i brought you in. If you dont remember what happened, just in case, im writing it down here...
The familiar events played through my mind, but i decided to read anyways.
We were in the River Forest, remember? These two guys came along: Riley and Edward. Edward wasn't keeping his eyes off you, and Riley was trying to pick a fight with me. Right when i was about to punch Riley, Edward picked you up after you were argueing with him and ran further into the forest. Riley was yelling 'go edward, go!!!' and i knocked him into the river, and he got sweeped away. I started running, but Edward ran faster. What knocked you out was his hand. He had hit you on the back of your head so you couldn't see anything. he brought you along our tunnel and threw you onto the pile of leaves we made for a seat together, in our forest home. He was trying to....you know....rape you when i got in there, but i hit him in the back of the head with a branch that i had found. i bet he's lost in the woods right now....or not. but i have your doors locked and windows. the police are out in the woods looking for him, and some are outsid your house. he's a 'professional' rapist, Prudence. Stay away from Edward Sullivan.
My mouth dropped open. Edward tried to rape me? And i didn't know we were argueing...i guess Jude thought we were argueing. Yes, i was knocked out. Maybe Jude was just confused. Me and Edward were having a nice conversation about how Riley picked alot of fights...and his kidnapping me was true....I ran into my living room to find a sillouette sitting on the couch. " Dear Prudence......" Edward began the song, and he had grabbed me by the waist as he walked me down the hall into my parents bedroom.....all i could hear was Dear Prudence, the song, and my screams. No one was there to save me...The policemen couldn't hear me....It was the end.
- by Prussian Tea |
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- | Submitted on 06/25/2009 |
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- Title: Broken Rose
- Artist: Prussian Tea
- Description: Really just a story that i made when i was bored. hope it does not disturb that i wrote it when i was 8..heh...
- Date: 06/25/2009
- Tags: broken rose
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Prussian Tea - 07/29/2009
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yeah. supposed to be funny...scary to some, hilarious to others
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- Cl3v3rRey - 07/24/2009
- I just want to laugh! But in a good way!
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- LexyCobriana - 07/03/2009
- You have no writing ability!!!! Gah!!!!!
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