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There is a boy, about 17 years old. He had semi-long black hair, and sea blue eyes with hazel in the very middle. His name is John. He was playing his guitar when he heard a truck outside. He was concerned so he grabbed his skateboard and ipod and left.Once he got outside, he could see a moving truck a couple houses down. He stepped on his skateboard a pushed his foot off the hot cement, rolling down the street. When he got closer to the house he started to slow down. He passed the house a bit then came to a complete stop, Observing the adults that were moving things into their new house.
"Hi!"
He turned around to see a young girl, about 16, gray-ish blue eyes, slate black hair with neon colored highlights, and a rainbow headband.
"Hey...You live here?"
He looked at her electric purple skinny jeans and Lime Green and pink invader zim shirt.
"Yeah, we're moving in now, as you can probably see"
She smiled and laughed a bit. He tried not to stare but he couldn't help himself, she was so, beautiful, as he would say.
"Oh, You skateboard? Thats cool, i've always wanted to but never had the chance to try."He zoned out of his deep stare and blinked.
"Yeah, You wanna try?" John picked up the skateboard and held it out.
"You sure...?" she looked a bit nervous
"Positive" He handed it to her and she put it on the ground. Once she stepped on it, it started to roll
"You're doin' good."
"Seriously? Cause i think i suck, can you help me?" she stopped the board and looked at him with batty eyelashes. He couldn't resist so he smiled and nodded
"Yeah, why dont we start tomorrow?" She looked up from the ground and into his eyes.
"Sure, that'll work" she smiled and handed his his board
"Keep it," He turned around and started walking back to his house.
"Im Amy! By the way." she yelled from down the street. He turned around and started walking backwards,
"Nice meeting you Amy, Im John!" He turned back around and walked up to his door, watching her nod and walk back into her house.
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The next day John was in his room trying to write a song, his mom was at work so he was home alone for a while. He heard two knocks at the door and knew exactly who it was. He put his pen and paper down and headed towards the door. Before he got there he stopped by his dresser and sprayed himself with axe. Then headed towards the door again. He opened the door to see Amy in a blue dress with ripped capris. He stared into her eyes whenever she talked
"Hey," She looked around "nice house." Suddenly he snapped back into focus.
"Oh, yeah, thanks. He walked into his room with her following behind.
"You play guitar, thats cool, i do too, wll bass anyways." she looked around
"Yeah? I play bass too, but im better at acoustic." He nodded, trying to resist the urge to stare.
"So you ready?" he walked out of his room and out the front door, letting Amy walk first, of course. They got into the middle of the street and Amy stepped onto the board.
"So how do i do this? Do i just push?" John nodded and stepped back. She started to roll, then she got faster, and faster, till she couldn't stop. She jumped off the board and rolled onto the ground, with the board still rolling. John ran over to her and helped her up.
"You okay?" he held her hands and looked at them
"Yeah, i'll be fine." He took her hands and pulled her back into his house.
"You have a deep cut, i think it's from a piece of glass" He took the first ai kit out and got a bandaid out.
"Here." He handed he the bandaid, when she opened it, it was her favorite color, Lime Green.
"Thanks..." she smiled and tried to resist staring too, but she couldnt. They both stared into each other's eyes, starting to lean in for a kiss, they closed their eyes. They weren't and inch away when...
"John! are you here!?" They quickly backed up from one another.
"Yes, Mom, i am here." he sighed and looked at her
"Well i better get going," she smiled and walked away "bye!" he followed her to the door
"Hey, do you wanna go see a movie with me and my friends?" he played around with his spider bite and looked at her
"Yeah," she nodded "pick me up around five?" she smiled and walked away
"Yeah, i'll see you then!" he yelled to her. Amy looked back and waved, then walked into her house.
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It was 4:30 and she was getting ready to go on the date. She didn't usually do this, but she really liked him so she got dressed up. She picked her Tripp Black Garter Lace-Up Dress, with her Draven panda mary jane flats. When it came five, she looked out her window and seen 3 people in the car. When she ran outside and walked up to the car, John opened the door for her.
"Hey, this is Veronica and Dylan" he pointed to the two in the back,making out. He turned around and started to drive. When they got to the theatres veronica and dylan got the tickets while John and Amy got the snacks.
"Hey, you look nice." he said smiling and looking into her eyes.
"Thanks, you do too." she smiled and stepped up to the counter. In the movies, Veronica ad Dlyan didn't even watch the movie and Amy and John sat close to each other. John held Amy's hand and held her close by him.
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After the movie, John drops Dylan and Veronica off and then heads to Amy's house. Once they get there, he walks her up to the door.
"Hey thanks, i had fun." she smiled and nodded.
"Im glad you did" he smiled slightly and held Amy's hand while giving her a gentle kiss on the cheek. She opened the door and started to walk into the house, still holding his hand, he pulled her back an quickly kissed her lips. Amy smiled and let his hand go, she blushed a little and walked inside. John walked home and neither of them could sleep. John didn't get to sleep till three and Amy didn't sleep till four.
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The next morning John took his skateboard and went down to Amy's house. Right before he knocked on the door, her mom answered. She took a sip of the liquor that was in her hand and glared at John.
"Amy, you have a friend." Amy came up to the door a smiled
"Thanks mom," Her mom walked away and muttered
"Yeah yeah." Amy walked out and closed the door, She gave him a hug and a kiss
"You ready?" John said, looking her in the eyes
"Yeah!" They held hands and walked down to the park. When they go there John sat under a tree and Amy sat next to him. He handed her a thornless yellow rose with a red tip.
"Thank you, You're sweet."She smiled and laid her head on John's shoulder. They sat there till nine, then got up and walked home. When they got to her house, he walked her up to the door, like usual.
"So, does this mean we," she looked at the ground then looked back up at John "go out?" she blushed and opened the door.
"Yeah, if you want to," She turned around and gave him a hug and kiss
"Okay!" she smiled and jumped into the house "Bye!" she closed the door. John smiled and walked away.
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It was two years later and they were still dating. Amy and John were walking home from the movies. They got to the house at nine thirty. John gave her a hug and kiss and said good bye as usual, but this time Amy didn't say bye. Instead, she pulled him inside. He shook his head and smiled playfully.
"No, wont your mom be home soon?"
"Nope she's not comin' back till tomorrow!" she smiled and pulled him onto the couch.
"Fine, but only because my mom wont either." Amy smiled and sat on his lap. John kissed her lips and smiled. Amy played with his lip ring then kissed him back. Soon they were making out on the couch, her shirt was off and his pants were off. He picked her up, still kissing her, and took her into the room. She kicked the door closed and bit his lip gently. He smiled and threw her onto the bed. Amy laughed and got on her knees, coming up to him and kissing him again, pulling him onto her and starting again. The next morning John woke up and looked at the clock, ten twenty, he got up quietly, trying not to wake her, and got his clothes on. When he finished he sat on the bed and kissed her lips. She woke up in the middle of the kiss and kissed him back. She smiled and bit her lip.
"What time is it?" She looked at John and grinned.
"Ten thirty" he shrugged and sighed "I've got to go, my mom will be home any minute." he frowned and stood up
"Awww, okay." she got up with a sheet and gave him another kiss and a hug. Then she waved bye.
"Bye babe" he walked out the room and closed her door so she could change. Then he walked home and changed, he couldn't go anywhere because he had to help his mom all day.
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Two weeks later, Amy started feeling sick, so she went into the bathroom and looked at herself. She could tell that her stomach was getting bigger. So she went to the drug store and bought a two liter soda and a couple of test. On the way home, she started to drink the soda. When she got home she took all the test. They all came out positive. She double checked all of them and cried, out of joy. She ran into the living room and grabbed the phone.
"Hey, John, can we walk, i have to tell you something!" she smiled and wiped her tears
"Yeah, i have to tell you something too, i'll be there in about 10"
"Okay. See you then!" Amy smiled "Bye babe" She hung up the phone and got ready. Ten minutes later she heard the door bell and ran to open it. She smiled when she seen him standing in front of her.
"Hey, you wanted to tell me something?" he looked at her and gave her a hug
"Yeah, but on the way home" she smiled and kissed him
"Okay..." he smiled and grabbed her hand, then walked with her to the park. When they got there, they went to the tree that they went to two years ago. She sat in his lap and fell asleep. He watched her and played with her hair. When she woke up, it was dark outside, but they didn't know what time it was. So they got up and headed home.
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"I want you to have something when we get home, it's a blue box with a couple things in it," he smiled and put his arm around her.
"Okay, well, I have good news!" she smiled and took a deep breath
"Okay, but before you say it, i want to tell you something, I LOVE YOU," she smiled and gave him a hug and a kiss
"I love you too," she smiled and kissed him, then took another deep breath. A car slowed down next to them, but they didn't think of anything "Well, John, im preg-" Then five shots stopped her in the middle of her sentence as she was suddenly laying on the ground in a puddle of blood. When she thought it was safe to get up, she realized it wasn't her blood she was sitting in, It was John's. She suddenly started to cry. When the ambulance came, they got got her fixed up and told her that he had jumped infront of her and had been shot in the heart and killed instantly. She was so depressed that she stayed in her room. About a month later, his mom brought the box to Amy's house. When she opened it, she seen the rose, a couple notes, pictures, and a little box. When she opened the box it had a diamond ring, and a little piece of paper folded in half. When she opened it, she read "I Love You, Be Mine Forever. Marry Me."
- by Chew On PeaBalls |
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- | Submitted on 06/17/2009 |
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- Title: A love story!
- Artist: Chew On PeaBalls
- Description: I need a title, tell me wat you think of it, and if you have an idea for a title, feel free to tell me! Chapters seperated by the lines
- Date: 06/17/2009
- Tags: love story
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Comments (6 Comments)
- mowhore k - 06/25/2009
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Thats an awesome story really sad at the end so sweet 10/10!
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- RavenMasen15 - 06/24/2009
- i almost cried at the end. amazing writing.
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- Demy_Chan92 - 06/23/2009
- O_o That was an awesome story! The ending was so sad I almost cried I loved it!
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- kii-chibi - 06/21/2009
- i agree with draco... i almost cried at the end...anyways, it's an awesome story! 5/5 ^_^
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- xyzdraco56 - 06/19/2009
- this started out like the perfect love story only to turn into tragedy... i think i almost cried at the end. awesome job.
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