The Cold Fate

• Artist: crazy_raezi
• Description: This is a story (based on true but not saying who) about a girl who loses her lover and tries to forget, but later, she realizes she can't. I think I was acting a little emo while writing this... ^__^'
• Date: 06/13/2009
• Tags: cold fate

I felt a hard, cold tear falling down my face. As I stared to the sky, wondering why this had to happen to me, I heard his sweet velvet voice calling to me. This must be the first time I actually want to run away from him, I thought sadly. I don't want him to see me like this. I feel depressed. My world is slowly falling apart. I hate him.

But little did I know then, that my whole world would soon crash into a million pieces. Now, I need him more than ever. I am now faced with this question.

What are you going to do now that what most mattered in your life (your true love) now hates you?

Comments

[GreanTee]

Ohhhhh - kay.
Not so sure about the emoness you try to reveal...but...
I don't think I should vote. o.o
Lmao.

[Paramore2789]

Acting emo while writing a story is good! You need to let the emotion flow! I like it! Keep writing and read my work!