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shadowriders part 8
by jaylen spencer
Jet was gathering materials for the temporary portal. He needed to find a special crystal the would be the power sorce of the portal.
He found a cavern that had the special crystal,named Itude the radiant light that came off the crystals gave the cavern a blue-ish color.
"Storm, I found some itude for the portal i'm on my way."jet said."Good hurry back,out." storm said over the radio .
As soon as he turned around he saw a disorted shadow on the ceiling."Who is there?"
to be continued...
Shadowriders part 9
Jet summoned his plasma whip , but before he was about to strike the shadow wasn't there.
"Optic Rage!" someone shouted,when jet turned around a red light was heading toward him "Gamma bolts!", jet fused aura from his plasma whip with the sonic beam shooter on his wrist,producing gamma rays.
When the attacks clashed together the cave was filled with light,when jet saw the person he stopped.
"Flash?!" he said" Don't talk to me brother, it's already bad enough that you took my team away from me!"
to be continued........
- by Saito Xion |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/08/2009 |
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- Title: Sahdowriders part 8-9
- Artist: Saito Xion
- Description: The eighth and ninth part in shadowrider book 1
- Date: 06/08/2009
- Tags: sahdowriders part89
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Ambrosia Sharp - 06/15/2009
- Please capitalize names, especially when you are using regular nouns as names. Grammical errors are the #1 reason so many aspiring writers never make it. I haven't read the other parts so I can't really judge your content.
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- Ride_The_Lightning12 - 06/15/2009
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This is pretty good for a non- pro
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