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Shelly was walking home as she heard a rustlinf in the bushes. eek .
She turned toward the bush to inspect nothing there.
She quickley turned around to continue her walk to find a strange man standing behind her.
She cluthed her books close to her chest fearing what may happen next.
sweatdrop Uh is there any thing i can do for you um sir, she said cautiouly as she took a step backward.
stare Yes there is he said as he grabed here arm and pulled her forward.
He pulled out an odd shapped bottle that had some vile smelling liquid in it.
rolleyes what are you going to do with that she stammered.
He shoved the end of the bottle to her mouth and the liquid seeped down her throat.
She seemed to sigh and she passed out.
The strange man held out his hands and she collapsed into them.
He carried her to the car and put her in the back seat and drove away.
TO BE CONTINED... neutral
- by Spam Investigator |
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- | Submitted on 06/06/2009 |
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- Title: TRAPPED
- Artist: Spam Investigator
- Description: a girl discovers she has powers when a man ubducts her she has a demon inside what will happen read 2 find out PLZ VOTE thanx for reading this is my first story on here
- Date: 06/06/2009
- Tags: trapped
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Malier - 07/24/2009
- Why the Hell are you putting smileys in your goddamned story? And where in Hell is your spellcheck? This is not a passable short story. This is trash. Work hard and maybe it will improve.
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- Spam Investigator - 06/19/2009
- thnx writing is fun 4 me im fix to make a new one today
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- vv7722 - 06/14/2009
- Pretty good.
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- Hear Panda Roar - 06/10/2009
- this is good
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