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Dylan and Zoey Hoffner both siblings and loved eachother very much
One day Zoey started acting weird so Dylan follows her one night
Zoey walks to a place where Dylan has never been too
Dylan walks in and see's Zoey with someone
Zoey turns around because she heard a noise "WHOS THERE"
she screams
Dylan doesnt turn around he just walks away
the guy says "huh, babi u ok"
"no wait hold on" so zoey runs to the person and stops him by holding his arm "who are you?" she asks
Dylan takes his hood off and and says "sorry Zoe"
Zoey was shocked tears come down her eyes
Dylan says "I just wanted to know where u were going every...." "what the hell man, leave my girl friend alone" the guy said
"thats my brother nick dont talk to him like that" zoey says
"sorry babii" the guy says. Zoey said "its ok Nick"
Dylan walks home
"im so sorry bro for not telling you about this" zoey starts crying
"i just wanted to no y u've been sneeken around" Dylan said
zoey hugs dylan tightly wishing she had told him to begin with and crys hard "im so sorry bro"
"im sorry to" dylan said
"hey listen dude keep away from Zoey you may talk to her but not get this close" Nick says pulling zoey away
"no u listen ,dude, shes my sister so u stay away from her" Dylan says
"So what if she's your sister, she's my girlfriend and you got no right on her anymore" Nick says
"Why dont both of you stop arguing about this and get along!" Zoey screams
"You stay out of this!" Nick told Zoey as he pushed her down on the ground
"Zoey" Dylan said. Dylan punched nick as hard as he could. Nick flys 5 feet back from where he was standing. "Zoey" Dylan said "r u ok"
"yeah..I just bruised my shoulder a little" Zoey shows Dylan her bruised spot bleeding
"we should get home zoey" dylan said. "not....so....fast" nick said
"Nick please stop fighting....." Zoey demanded
"Zoey get home" Dylan said. nick starts glowing red, then nicks ture form shows "a demon" Dylan yells "zoey get home"
"no! I dont want to leave you alone to fight" zoey responds
Dylan pulls out two 9mm pistols and shot the demon, and the demon fades in to darkness.Dylan walks over to the where the demon was and picked something up
Zoey gets up and runs to dylan and makes him drop it but it was too late dYlan was caught by the darkness
one day later......
"huh where im i" dylan says "gawd man," a guy said in the darkness "i leave u alone for one min and u turn around and do this." "sorry Nero" Dylan siad.
but back with zoey......
- Title: Bro 'n" Sis? Is this the end?!
- Artist: iiTechna
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Description:
What me and My brother Worked together on.
This is only part 1 - Date: 05/21/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Colin Singleton - 04/03/2013
- Incorrect grammar makes it really difficult to read.
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- xXRainbow_PixieXx - 05/21/2009
- This is very interesting....you should actually make some of those letters into words. But other than it it was good 4/5
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- xXJoS - 05/21/2009
- .... dylan, zoey, nick....
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