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"They said it was suicide!" I yelled as I clenched my fists and punched my friend's locker, denting it. I flattened my hand against the locker and looked down at the ground. "They said he killed himself!" My knuckles started to bleed. "That's bull!"
My friend took a small step back, but then stepped forward and patted my shoulder.
"Why would they say that?!" I continued to yell, tears welling up in my eyes, "His own parents!" I slapped my hand on the locker.
My friend put his backpack down, letting it flop to the floor. He bent over slightly and opened it, pulling out a plastic water bottle, filled to the brim with water. He stuck the bottle out towards me, offering it.
I turned my head and looked down at the bottle sadly. I grabbed the bottle and tilted my head back as I poured some of the water into my mouth, holding the bottle above it. The water was warm and tasted like the metal it came from. I swallowed a bit of it and swished the rest around in my mouth until I spit it away onto the cold, cement floor. I handed the bottle back to my friend.
"Maybe he did," he put the bottle back into his backpack, "I mean, he was depressed."
"No," I looked at my friend, the tears turning to anger, "That stupid b***h of a step-mom said he was." I paused, waiting for my friend to reply, and when he didn't I continued, "Him and I were best friends, we knew everything about each other. He was only acting depressed to get his step mom worked up. He would've told me if he was really having problems, okay. He wasn't depressed Jake."
Jake took a step back before saying, "He could've been lying. Depressed people do, and most of the people who knew him thought he was a liar."
I thought about punching him, but held myself back. "No, that wasn't the only thing wrong with it, he had no bruises." Jake looked confused, so I explained, "His parents said that they found him hanging from the fan in his bedroom."
"Yeah, so?" Jake asked, wondering what I was getting to.
"If you hang yourself, you get bruises on your neck," I replied. "Bruises don't go away after you've died and they don't appear either. When we were at the funeral, I remember not seeing any on his neck and his real mom had even pointed out noticing that he seemed unharmed. Do you remember seeing and bruises?"
Jake thought hard for a few seconds before saying, "No, I don't remember any. I think you might have a point, Eric."
"Yeah," I looked up at with a serious expression, "Tomas didn't kill himself, he was killed."
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- Title: He didn't...
- Artist: grimusdave
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A quick story idea I came up with while I was sitting in my last class today... Please comment.
There's more of this part, if you want to see comment me or send me a message. - Date: 05/20/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- reiraa-chan - 05/24/2009
- oh shiz :O
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- Sora Ryuuzaki - 05/23/2009
- Dang. Lots of suspense in this one. I'd like to see more, please :] I want to know what happened to Tomas.
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- Clonz 600 - 05/22/2009
- yay
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- Chomp Chomp Dead - 05/20/2009
- oh wow really nice story
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