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PAGE ONE biggrin AY
PANEL ONE
SAMAEL, thin and dirty, stands on the side of the road.
Little black wings come from it's shoulder blades, too
small to be real. Prostitutes walk the street.
PANEL 2
(SAM)
A car stops in front of Sam, and it bends forward, leaning
on the open window.
SAM
Howdy there. You traveling alone today?
PANEL 3
(MAN)
The driver looks at Sam's chest from over his dark glasses
MAN
I don't take boys.
PANEL 4
(SAM)
Sam winks.
SAM
I may not be a girl, sir, but I'm definitely
no boy. I'm different.
PANEL 5
(MAN)
The man pushes the lock button
MAN
Get in.
PAGE 2
PANEL 1
A light turns on on the third floor of a cheap apartment.
PANEL 2
Sam, naked, sits atop the man, who is still fully dressed,
just his pants are undone. Sam's hands are clenched, and
it's teeth are clenched behind it's hair.
PANEL 3
(MAN)
The man sits up, awkwardly.
MAN
I-I'm sorry. From your offer I didn't think
this was your first time.
PANEL 4
(SAM)
Sam looks up, surprised, tears in it's eyes.
SAM
It's not that, sir. Sorry. No, this isn't my
first time. I'm sorry.
PANEL 5
(MAN)
The man leans forward and hugs Sam.
MAN
It's okay. You're still new at this, that's
easy to see.
PANEL 6
Through the window, Sam tries again.
PAGE 3
PANEL 1
Sam walks down the street, it's arms wrapped around it's
thin shoulders.
PANEL 2
Sam pushes into a sandwich shop.
PANEL 3
(PETE)
PETE, a tall man with long hair pushed back into a hair net,
wipes his hands on his apron, smiling.
PETE
Hey, Sammybabe! How's it going?
PANEL 4
(SAM)
Sam looks into the glass container at the sandwiches.
SAM
It's gone better, Pete. How's the store?
PANEL 5
(PETE)
Pete leans over the counter.
PETE
It's been really busy today, Sammy. This is
actually the first break I've had today.
PAGE 4
PANEL 1
(SAM)
Sam smiles, small and painfully.
SAM
Well that's good. Your sandwiches will be
famous someday.
PANEL 2
(PETE)
Pete stops smiling and looks at Sam, worriedly, coming
around the counter.
PETE
Sammy...I want you to be here. I don't know
what your doing, but I know it's not good
for you. I could use you at the shop.
PANEL 3
(SAM)
Sam turns it's face down, so it's hair covers it's eyes.
SAM
I'm okay. I promise.
PANEL 4
(PETE)
Pete bends forward, rubbing Sam's shoulders with his big,
muscular hands.
PETE
Are you still in between apartments? Mine's
too big, We could split it.
PAGE 5
PANEL 1
(SAM)
Sam looks up, smiling.
SAM
It's okay. I promise. Just a couple more days
and I'll have my own place. I already have it
set up.
PANEL 2
(PETE)
Pete stands, crossing his arms, eyebrows knit.
PETE
I'm worried about you, Sammybabe.
PANEL 3
(SAM)
Sam leans on the glass counter. It points at a sandwich.
SAM
Don't be. Can I have this one, please?
PANEL 4
Sam digs in the back pockets of it's ultra tight jeans for
cash while Pete walks back around the counter.
PANEL 5
Pete trades Sam the sandwich for a handful of loose bills.
PAGE 7
PANEL 1
Sam walks towards a booth at the window.
PANEL 2
Sam sits, facing a mirror. It reflects Amanda behind Sam, as
she hurriedly tries to cover a black eye with make up.
PANEL 3
(SAM)
Sam turns, looking over at her.
SAM
Looks like your day is worse than mine.
PANEL 4
(AMANDA)
Amanda looks up at it, surprised.
AMANDA
What? Oh, this. No. I got hit in the eye
yesterday by a baseball. Some kids were
playing on my street.
PANEL 5
(SAM)
Sam spins into the seat across from her.
SAM
Mind if I sit with you?
PANEL 6
(AMANDA)
Amanda picks up her purse.
AMANDA
Actually, yeah. My boyfriend is on his way
and he's kind of the jealous type.
PAGE 8
PANEL 1
(SAM)
Sam unwraps it's sandwich.
SAM
What's to be jealous of?
PANEL 2
(AMANDA)
Amanda leans forward
AMANDA
He may think your being here is more than
friendly.
PANEL 3
(SAM)
Sam leans back, truly smiling for once.
SAM
Oh! You think I'm a boy! Wow. You know,
you're the second one today!
PANEL 4
(AMANDA)
Amanda covers her face in embarrassment.
AMANDA
Oh dear! I'm so sorry.
PANEL 5
(SAM)
Sam laughs.
SAM
Don't worry about it. The gender question
helps me all of the time.
PAGE 9
PANEL 1
(AMANDA)
Amanda sits forward, more comfortable, smiling.
AMANDA
Oh yeah? How? What do you do?
PANEL 2
(AMANDA)
Sam stops smiling, looking a bit sick.
AMANDA
What? You okay?
PANEL 3
(SAM)
Sam leans forward on the table.
SAM
Nothing. I do nothing.
PANEL 4
The door jingles as it opens and GREG steps into the shop.
He is short and muscular and square, donning a crew cut and
a muscle shirt.
PANEL 5
(AMANDA)
Greg walks over to the booth. Amanda stands up.
AMANDA
Hey babe!
PAGE 10
PANEL 1
(GREG)
Greg grabs Amanda by the wrist, inconspicuously. He looks at
Sam, who tries to get small.
GREG
You look great today, Mands. Who's your
friend?
PANEL 2
(AMANDA, SAM)
Amanda gestures with her free hand. Sam starts to stand,
hand extended.
AMANDA
Greg this is...
SAM
Ah, it's Sam. You must be the boyfriend I've
been hearing about.
PANEL 3
(GREG, SAM)
Sam's handshake is feminine, so Greg grabs only the tips of
it's fingers.
GREG
Good things I hope?
SAM
Of course.
PANEL 4
(GREG, AMANDA)
Amanda and Greg sit back down across from Sam. Greg looks at
Amanda, expectantly, she bites her lip.
GREG
Did you get me a sandwich, hon?
AMANDA
They had something new today, babe, that I
thought you would like. Pete's toasting it
for you now.
PAGE 11
PANEL 1
(GREG)
Greg's giant hand crushes Amanda's smaller one and he leans
forward, pushing her into a corner.
GREG
You know what I like, hon. This better be
good.
PANEL 2
(SAM, AMANDA)
Sam wipes its mouth with a napkin, setting it's sandwich
down for a moment.
SAM
Greg, your lovely girlfriend-
AMANDA
Amanda
SAM
-Amanda was telling me about how she got a
black eye from being hit by a baseball
yesterday. Were you there?
PANEL 3
(GREG)
Greg looks at him, angrily.
GREG
That's known of your business, is it?
PANEL 4
(SAM)
Sam stands up
SAM
Actually, Greg, it is. You see, pain is one
of the most easily seen things in the world
and the easiest to inflict.
PANEL 5
(SAM)
Sam leans forward.
SAM
It takes a great man to keep from hurting
others. And even though I hardly know you, I
can tell that you are no great man.
PAGE 12
PANEL 1
(GREG, SAM)
Greg stands, teeth and fists clenched. They stand next to
the table, looking straight at each other.
GREG
What did you say?
SAM
I said that your an abusive d**k. You don't
deserve Amanda.
PANEL 2
(SAM)
Greg throws a punch, which Sam dodges.
SAM
Sorry Pete!
PANEL 3
Pete turns, frying pan in hand, trying to get in on the
action
PANEL 4
Sam punches, it's fist oddly red.
PANEL 5
The fist connects with Greg's gut.
PANEL 6
Greg's eyes are open in shock.
PAGE 13
PANEL 1
Greg folds, an arm around his stomach, his shirt looks
burnt.
PANEL 2
(AMANDA)
Amanda rushes to Greg's side
AMANDA
What the ******** is wrong with you?
PANEL 3
(PETE)
Sam takes a step back, meeting Pete.
PETE
Here I was thinking you'd need my help. I
wish I had been able to get to him sooner.
PANEL 4
(SAM)
Sam grabs what's left of the sandwich on the table.
SAM
I have to get back to work.
PAGE 14
PANEL 1
(HOMELESS MAN)
A homeless man stands on the side of the road, a cigarette
in hand. Sam rushes by, trying to contain it's anger.
HOMELESS MAN
You have a light?
PANEL 2
Sam turns, and gives him a light, which reaches high into
the sky. Sam isn't holding a lighter.
PANEL 3
Sam walks to a narrow bridge, where only geese and ducks
hang around.
PANEL 4
Sam leans on the side, spitting anger.
PANEL 5
Sam falls back, leaning on the other side.
PANEL 6
Sam slides down it
PAGE 15
PANEL 1
(PETE)
Pete taps Greg in the gut with his foot
PETE
Hey, mate. Get up. You're supposed to be some
sort of tough guy, right?
PANEL 2
Greg glares up at Pete
PANEL 3
(AMANDA)
Amanda slides next to Pete.
AMANDA
Go on, Greg. Get out've here.
PANEL 4
(GREG)
Greg stands, slumped.
GREG
What's wrong with you, Amanda?
PANEL 5
(AMANDA)
Amanda crosses her arms and looks at her feet.
AMANDA
I don't approve of what Sam did. But she was
right. I'll come by tomorrow to pick up my
stuff.
PAGE 16
PANEL 1
Greg spits on the ground
PANEL 2
He pushes himself out of the shop
PANEL 3
(AMANDA)
Amanda sits in the booth, holding her head.
AMANDA
Oh s**t. What am I going to do? Greg'
probably going to kill me.
PANEL 4
(PETE)
Pete sits with her, an arm around her.
PETE
Here. How about I come with you? Keep the lug
away?
PANEL 5
(AMANDA, PETE)
Amanda looks up at Pete.
AMANDA
How did she knows?
PETE
Sam? She's got a way of knowing what your
problem is. She's great at solving them too.
Just not her own.
PAGE 17:NIGHT
PANEL 1
Sam walks through the night, headlights lighting the way.
PANEL 2
Sam looks at a car window, seeing it's reflection.
PANEL 3
Sam looks away, brushing some stray hair behind one ear.
PANEL 4
(HOMELESS MAN)
Some homeless men stand around a trash can. One looks at Sam
HOMELESS MAN
Hey, Spare a light?
PANEL 5
Sam turns and joins the men. It tosses some garbage into the
can.
PAGE 18
PANEL 1
A great fire comes from the can. They all huddle around it.
PANEL 2
(TOOTHLESS MAN)
The men look at the fire at each other and at Sam. One of
them, whose missing teeth and hair, points at Sam.
TOOTHLESS MAN
We were all just telling stories. You want to
join us?
PANEL 3
(SAM)
Sam warms it's hands
SAM
If I may. Who's turn is it?
PANEL 4
The toothless man points at Sam.
PANEL 5
(SAM)
Sam smiles
SAM
Well, I'll bet you haven't heard this one.
PAGE 19
PANEL 1
(SAM)
Two angels stand side by side, holding hands, a city of
silver behind them.
SAM
We all know that God awoke in the void and
decided to create something new. The first
things He made were His angels, Michael and
the Morningstar. He then built them a city,
so they could learn and grow.
PANEL 2
(SAM)
The two angels stand at a pedestal, a crowd of others
surrounding them.
SAM
In this city were other angels, and they
taught each other through their skills and
abilities.
PANEL 3
(SAM)
The angels do all sorts of tasks, showing each other how
each is done.
SAM
This entertained Him and he sat and watched
for a long, long time.
PAGE 20
PANEL 1
(SAM)
The Earth sits alone in a black sky.
SAM
But he is easily distracted and quickly
becomes bored. He decided to create a new
world, one where the beings created
themselves.
PANEL 2
(SAM)
Two more angels appear, these ones with genitalia.
SAM
For this He created his first experiment,
Atiell and Myrael were placed in the Silver
City to procreate, so He could see how the
new life forms should exist.
PANEL 3
(SAM)
A group of angels throw stones at Atiell and Myrael.
SAM
But the angels did not like the newcomers.
They were afraid that He would love them
more and forget about the other angels, so
they threw things at them, called them names
and chased them to the edge of the city.
PANEL 4
(SAM)
Myrael leans against Atiell, hands around her swollen tummy.
SAM
They completed their function, and soon
Myrael was pregnant.
PAGE 21
PANEL 1
(SAM)
Michael flies out of the city, into the void
SAM
Michael was sent out of the city to inform
Him of the progress of the experiment
PANEL 2
(SAM)
Angels stand shoulder to shoulder, swords drawn
SAM
He became afraid. A child would be a new idea
and a new idea is just as powerful as an old
one. He ordered the child killed, before it
could be born.
PANEL 3
(SAM)
Myrael lies on the ground, swords sticking her wings to the
ground, one through her stomach and one through her heart.
SAM
The angels carried out their function. They
cut out her heart and stabbed it through.
Threw their swords into her to kill the
fetus.
PANEL 4
(SAM)
Atiell sits, next to Myrael's body, head in his arms
SAM
Atiell stayed by her body for the rest of the
day.
PAGE 22
PANEL 1
(SAM)
The Morningstar sits beside Atiell, holding him to it's
chest.
SAM
The Morningstar came to Atiell,the only one
of the angels who had no hand in Myrael's
death. They sat and spoke and decided.
PANEL 2
(SAM)
The Morningstar walks through the city, carrying Myrael's
body. The city around them is on fire.
SAM
The Morningstar showed his anger the next
day, carrying Myrael, it burned everything
it came into contact with. Michael stopped
the Morningstar, warning it with the wrath
of God. But the Morningstar paid no heed.
PANEL 3
(SAM)
An angel escorts Atiell through the Silver City
SAM
Atiell came and as soon as he entered the
garden where the Morningstar and Myrael
waited, the area was enclosed in fire.
PANEL 4
(SAM)
The three of them stand around Myrael's body, which rests on
a pedestal.
SAM
Here they held the first of all the burial
services. It closely resembled those that we
have today for the richest and most famous.
PAGE 23
PANEL 1
(SAM)
The Morningstar steps out of the garden only to be ran
through with the sword of Michael. Atiell and the other
angel stay by his side.
SAM
Upon leaving the service, the Morningstar was
run through by the sword of it's kin,
Michael. Not for the wrath of God, but for
the wrath of it's equal.
PANEL 2
The Morningstar stands, emotionless
PANEL 3
Sam looks the same way.
PANEL 4
(BLACK HOMELESS MAN)
One of the homeless men, a tall black man with dreads, looks
at Sam quizzically.
BLACK HOMELESS MAN
Excuse me, but, I was a priest for 30 years.
I've never heard this story.
PANEL 5
(SAM)
Sam looks at him and smiles
SAM
And you probably never will again. I tell you
though, it's just as true as any other
stories you may have heard from your book
though.
PAGE 24
PANEL 1
Sam walks away from the fire and the homeless men, a thin
smile on it's lips
PANEL 2
The men watch Sam walk off, black burnt remains of wings
sticking from it's back.
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I know the format is odd, but that's because it's a comic book script. There is a little bit of skankiness, but there's no detail so there shouldn't be any issues.
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- Sassi_suicide - 05/25/2009
- kinda long i didn't make it half way reading it. So far i think its good.
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