- once Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX went to zomg.he saw nicolae saying who wants to make a deal with me.Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX said me.nicolae blasted Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX with solar ray ring.Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX used bump ring on nicolae. nicolae went flying in pain with a little health.but nicolae teleported back.then Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX saw the omgwtf.omgwtf struck Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX and Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX got healed by nicolae.nicolae said 5 gaia cash please.Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX said fine and then nicolae got dazed he got strucked very hard on the head.Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX said nooooo!!.but suddenly came Xxemo_bloodedxX to the rescue.Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX said wanna fight Xxemo_bloodedxX said yes.they both killed garlic,gramsters,peelungers,omfg.omg,wtf,crabs and now they were gonna the omgwtf.Xxemo_bloodedxX used his shreiken ring.while Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX was using bump they almost destroyed omgwtf.but then came omfg,wtf,and omg.Xxemo_bloodedxX was all getting strucked by all the animated but then Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX went to the resce(part 2 to be continued.)
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- | Submitted on 05/17/2009 |
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- Title: zOMG! (part 1)
- Artist: Xx_takuto_meyers_50xX
- Description: hey i hope u like action i will write more later so enjoy part 1
- Date: 05/17/2009
- Tags: zomg part1
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Vezild - 04/08/2010
- dude it makes NO SENSE!!! no offense. and MrGrunnie is kinda overdoing the comment thing, but grammar, and phonics seem to be major weaknesses with you >_>...maybe using some quotation marks, maybe some description, and then u might want to put names that make more sense!!! This is like a kindergarten's story.
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- MrGrunnie - 08/01/2009
- THIS IS THE GRAMMAR POLICE. are you a noob?? 0r some thin
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- MrGrunnie - 08/01/2009
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and they all dieed
LMAO LOL
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- MrGrunnie - 07/30/2009
- THIS IS RANDOM s**t
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- -Deathly Destruction- - 05/26/2009
- what is this nonsense.....?
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