Dragonrings 0/8

• Artist: starrunner15
• Description: Well, this story is inspired by some dreams I had. They were kinda... creepy. By the way, this is the prequal to the series. But I hope you'll like it. *Moves into a shadowy corner and watches you.*
• Date: 05/17/2009
• Tags: night shadow

This isn't how I wanted death to come. I wanted it to come from a freak car accident, not from a battle on top of a volcano, against a dragon and its sick rider with my dead lover near me.

I wanted to surrender to the rider and give it to him. But another half of me wanted to have him fight for it, show him that he can't have it unless I'm dead. Then I remembered something that my lover said to me before he died.

You can do it. Since I can't, end his life... for ours and the world's. Suddenly, tears filled my eyes and I made a grab for his bow- mine now charred from lava-and nocked a silver arrow, glinting in the moonlight. Quickly, I aimed and shot it, the point toward his head...

Comments

[Broken Blind]

Feh, not too bad, however, it is incredibly weak on its own, a simple teaser (which I'm sure you meant to be), it seemed to drop off a little bit towards the end style wise, BUT the general idea sounds good and the writing shows much promise... I don't like to say this, but check out my stuff, I kind of want to get more noticed, just look me up? Oh, I give this a 4/5

[Farren Gold]

REally good story. Keep Writing.