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Some girls have life the easy way,some do not.Im going to tell you a story about two girls.First is Zoey(me)
"Zoey,sweetie,wake up your going to be late."my mom said.I sat straight up with a little yelp.You see,today is a very important day for me because today is the state talent show."Come on,Lars is waiting outside for you."Lars was my limo driver."Wear a t-shirt and some jeans,your outfit is at the spa."My mother always makes me go to the spa before something special.
At the spa Linda(the lady who did my hair and make-up)worked on my hair for an hour!All she did was put a cloud of hair spray on me.She did my make-up after she rested(she has the shortest legs I have ever seen!)She put pink eyeshadow on me and sparkles all over my face(my mom is always telling me what on the inside counts)When Linda was done I put on my outfit.It was the most wonderful dress I have ever seen!"Zoey,come on its time to go!"
"Zoey,your next."my mom told me.When some girl named Tina finished,I went on stage.I was nervous because Tina was actually good.I began my song and it went perfect.I was the last one to sing."Good job sweetie."my mom said."And the winner is....."
Tina(the not so easy life girl)
"TINA"my grandmother yelled.Im living with my grandmother now because my parents died of cancer."GET DOWN HERE OR YOUR GOING TO BE LATE!!!"I was going to be in the state talent show today.A girl like me has no chance of winning though,I heard Zoey was going to be in it also.She is rich and popular,im not.My grandmother made me a dress last week,and Im not going to lie,it was hideous!"TINA, COME ON NOW!!!""Ok"I ran into her room.She had her make-up kit and the dress."Sit on the bed while I put on the make-up"my grandmom said.I sat on the bed and she began to work.Two minutes later she was done."Now put on the dress."I really didn`t want to but she was my grandmother and made it for me.So I put it on and as soon as I did my grandmother and I rushed out the house.We jumped into her mini van and took of for the talent show.
When we got there I saw Zoey.I went over to her and said good luck.She smiled at me and walked away.I thought I saw a cloud of hairspray!!It must of been dust."Would Tina please go to the stage."I walked on the stage and as soon as I did,the people watching(like over a thousand)started laughing,but when I started to sing they were wide mouthed.Was I that good?I guess I was because when I was done Zoey was staring at me.
Zoey was the last one to sing."And the winner is....its a tie between Zoey and Tina! Since there is a tie,they will sing next week in California!"G.A.S.P!!!I can`t believe I tied with Zoey!!Uh oh,she looks mad....
-Im going to make a second one so please tell me what you think of this-
- by CrAzY_Z03Y |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/13/2009 |
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- Title: Easy way and The Hard Way
- Artist: CrAzY_Z03Y
- Description: Some girls have life the easy way,others dont.
- Date: 05/13/2009
- Tags: easy hard
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Livertas - 10/31/2010
- Nice concept, everything else needs a lot of work. Characterisation, spelling, everything.
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- CrAzY_Z03Y - 05/14/2009
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thanks
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- XXxxKarimaxxXX - 05/14/2009
- its not bad, good concept!! 4/5
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- CrAzY_Z03Y - 05/13/2009
- Im going to get this published,so tell me what you think.If people like it Im going to write the second book
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