- As I looked up into the heavens, I wished I wasnt human. Being human is makeing me suffer. The bullying and torment. The taxes putting me and friends on the streets. I prayed to God to cure my suffering. As I walked home I noticed a patch of fur and claws as my hands. I then noticed my ears shifting up. Then my chest and legs started to shift out of my clothes and turning furry. As I wondered what was going on. then my nose shifted into a muzzle. Then the last thing I known was me being on all four. Then I realized god has answered my prayers. Then I yelled "THANK YOU GOD" and ran off to my new life.
- Title: Transformation To Freedom
- Artist: Gandor6
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This is about a person who is suffering and takes a walk in the park while she suffers her life
if u dont believe in god dont read poem
oh yah she turns into a fox - Date: 04/27/2009
- Tags: transformation freedom
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- Sierra1717 - 05/11/2009
- biggrin
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- ginoocco - 04/28/2009
- its a good short story but there is a lot that you can do to fix it. ^^
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- Gandor6 - 04/28/2009
- it may suck but this isnt my best worck
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