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The first thing I saw, when I woke up, was the blood.
And my leg hurts so much, I cannot resist the pain.
When I look at my leg, I see a deep wound.
How did it come so far?
When I look around me,I see a dark alley full of mist.
Oh it's so cold outside..
Who did this to me?
When I try to stand up, I fall.
And then I see that sharp arrow in my hand.
No feeling, no pain.
That's not a good sign at all.
I crawle on the ground searching for people, something that's alive.
Nothing..
I'm afraid of what's coming...
Then I see that hospital with some lights on.
Why didn't I see that, in the first place..and then it happens, I past out..
I lost too many blood.
When I wake up, I get stressed.
Where did they put me???
It's a dark room with hospital machines in it.
I panic and try to stand up.
No results.
Ahh it hurts.
Then a doc. comes inside.
Hello, Who are you, I ask with a weak voice.
He doesn't answer, he just kisses my forhead.
What,Did he just kiss me, the doctor?
And then I realize i'm in a coma..
End of chapter one.
Hope you well, like it I guess
And for the moderators, please I will not make it very crule, or rude..
I'm anti hard-violence.
~Adonia~
- by Misses Lacey |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/25/2009 |
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- Title: I was I where, Chapter one.
- Artist: Misses Lacey
- Description: Sad story about..a girl.
- Date: 03/25/2009
- Tags: cryforhelp
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Renji-baka Abarai - 05/20/2009
- Its good, but the spelling and Grammer needs a little help. Its much blood not many blood. cool Story though.
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- kjaslkdjiehdfba - 04/02/2009
- It was very luring so i finished reading. Just needs fix on conventions. Spelling.
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