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"Long ago, there was a family living in a beautiful town called 'Carlisia'. There was a girl name Joselie. She lived with her parents and her older brother, Marcus. They lived happily until one day the evil king of their country wanted her father as his personal assistant. For you see, her father was the most successful man in the country! They refused! But the king wouldn’t take no for a answer. So, they ran!
For a year, Joselie and her family wondered in different countries! They soon grew tired of moving about like this, so they settled down in a very small village, where they thought the king will never find them!
But the king eventually found them. And since Joselie's father refused his offer, the king decided that they weren't worthy to be part of his country, so he ordered for the family's life! Her father was the first to be murdered! Then her mother! Luckily, Joselie and Marcus got away from the king and his men! After 12 years, Joselie and her brother were still hidden from the king’s fate for them!
'Whoa!! That was a wonderful story, Jo!' said the little children in the orphanage.
'Well, I am glad you all like it!' Jo smiled 'Well then children, I will see you all next week!'
Jo walked down the streets of Sarcalis. She went to where her brother is working and went to look around for him. She found him and went over.
'Mars, hurry up! You were supposed to come pick me up 10 minutes ago!' Jo yelled across the room.
'Hey Mars, I think you should go! She might bite your head off again!' Mars friend, Keth, laughed.
Mars rolled his eyes and went over to his sister.
'Why didn't you wait for me then? I was almost done!' Mars complained!
Mars and Jo knew perfectly well why they shouldn't stay out in the town after sun down. When the sun sets, their eyes turned bright blue! And there were many wanted posters everywhere! And the information states that the people in the photo, When the moonlight hits their eyes, they turn brighter blue than in the day!
‘Fine! I know what you're thinking! We shall go home now!' Mars said.
He got into his clean garments and said goodbye to his co-workers and his boss and went on his way with his sister!
Their home was small... but there was a atmosphere that would put a frown into a smile!
'What would u like for tea?? it is your choice tonight!' Jo said.
Mars thought about it then said 'I would like to taste mother's famous stew recipe again, Joselie!'
Jo glared at him. Mars knew that if anyone heard their full names, the king could find them again!
'You know very well that you shouldn't call me by that name!Until our father's name is cleared, you shouldn't call me that! And i shant call yours.’ Joselie said between her teeth!
Marcus knew very well that Joselie was very upset about what the king did to him and his family. He just nodded knowing that she would start shouting again.
The next morning, Joselie went out to the market! There is always a happy and joyous feeling in the market! Everyone in the there knew Jo to be a wonderful, out-going and happy girl. When help is needed in the stalls or when the parents of children are in need of a babysitter, Jo was always there.
Everything was fine and glorious until he came! King Bagalone arrived to search for Joselie and Marcus.
- by marshii_akira |
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- | Submitted on 03/21/2009 |
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- Title: home to Carlisia Cpt 1
- Artist: marshii_akira
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Description:
First chpt of the story...chpt 2 coming!
ENJOY - Date: 03/21/2009
- Tags: coming home carlisia
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Comments (4 Comments)
- opaque_fantasy - 06/13/2009
- hey i loved it but dont u think there are too many exclamation marks??!!!
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- aniger-eew - 03/25/2009
- Marvellous! Excellent! Amazing! ;D
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- dream of magic - 03/23/2009
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This is gonna be great one akira ^-^ [honest! it already is really]
[PS - I know I've said this before but it's always so much better if spellling and grammer are correct, please proof read before you post] - Report As Spam
- smellybelly1360 - 03/22/2009
- Well done. Few spelling errors though
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