- comeon jeremy ur fine~! sed carlos on a fearful night in the in bill the killers house.here im gunna get a drink wana come jeremy ?carlos said.no jeremy replied.15 mins and still no carlos!jimmy wus scared he knew hes shoud of not come.he went into the kitchen and in an instant before he could do anything two little boys head choped off was on the floor.the next day bill put the boys heads on his new head shelf
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- | Submitted on 03/14/2009 |
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- Title: BILL THE PSCYCO KILLER PART 1
- Artist: black shadow knight 1
- Description: MUHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH WATCH UR BACK!!!!!!!!!!!
- Date: 03/14/2009
- Tags: bill pscyco killer
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Comments (4 Comments)
- vendetta attednev - 09/01/2010
- dude. i agree with everyone below. it's not good. it's short. you have a brain. and please, use proper grammar and spelling, not chat-speak: like, omg, no wai.
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- Mark Fontaine - 07/25/2010
- Eh. First of all, "psycho". That's the correct spelling. Second of all, where's the hook, the buildup, the climax? In other words, why am I reading this?
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- l Emily l - 07/25/2009
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Um.
Spell check.
And.
Longer.
Story.
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- Hear Panda Roar - 03/20/2009
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er it needs more hmmmm more more writing right now it makes no sense
could u rate and comment my two postings?
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