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"Hinr..." a voice said. The voice seemed to come from the back of the head. And it seemed to be feminine. "Hinr, there is more to you than you think there is." the voice continued. "Wha...who are you, and what do you mean?" Hinr asked."I am someone you will meet on your journey. I have the power to control minds. You have the power to summon incredible agility and strength. I cannot explain everything now. I must go!" "Wait! COME BACK!!!!!!!"Hinr screamed. He woke up in the Hospital, dressed in white clothes. He felt his head to see if there were any wounds. All he noticed was that his brown shaggy hair grew longer. "I must have been talking to that girl for longer than I expected." Hinr told himself."But I feel so...so...wierd...what's happening to me?"a nurse came in the room. She told someone behind her,"He's awake, Mr.Wilson." she said. As soon as she left, a tall, lone figure was in the room. He had long, dark brown hair, and a black vest. "Dad?" Hinr said. "Who else?" said the figure. He walked over to Hinr and said,"There is something important I should tell you." he looked around to make sure no one was listening and closed the door. Then he continued,"Son, you can't trust that many people. You see this sash?" as he said that he pointed to a Blue sash on his waist."You can only trust people that have a sash that is a color other than Red or Black.""Why, dad? I thought I could also trust my sisters, but they don't have sashes at all..." right after Hinr said that, his dad thrusted a sash onto him. "Put this on quick, change to your regular clothes, and get out of here!" his dad said, turning around,"and I'll stand guard here." he said, standing in front of the door. Hinr did so really fast. His sash was a gold that seemed to sparkle. "Let's go" said Hinr. As soon as he said that, the door flew open, and two men with red sashes burst in. "There he is!!" one said. The other took a shot with his gun at Hinr. Somehow, Hinr had enough agility to dodge the bullet and send the man blast onto the wall with a good hard kick. The second man tried to punch Hinr, but Hinr was fast. He dodged it and sent the man flying backwards with a counter punch. He opened the window and jumped out. His dad followed. They eventually landed on the ground and started running as fast as they could. Hinr's dad had to shapeshift into a Cheetah and start running really fast. Hinr stopped and tried to do that. However, he turned into a Rhino. 'Way cool!' Hinr thought. He then started running even faster than he ran earlier. 'So long, noobz' Hinr thought as he kept on running.
END OF EP.1
- Title: Torment 1 chp.2
- Artist: Mthieu7
- Description: This is part 2 of Torment 1. Enjoy! Oh yeah and I should tell you how Hinr is pronounced:"Ham-muhr".
- Date: 03/08/2009
- Tags: torment chp2 streets
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Mthieu7 - 03/08/2009
- Well keep waiting cuz I release another episode every 1 or 2 days. Patience, neko, patience....
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- Happiest_Dark_Neko - 03/08/2009
- I likes good story line keep it up man I'm goin o be waiting for the next one
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