Miyu

• Artist: WeirdGothicCreepyChick
• Description: A cupple of parigraphs of my book that I am trying to write
• Date: 03/01/2009
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Hello my name is Eileen but I prefer Elly. I am 14 and in 7th grade. I always hide my face with a docters mask and always ware my black gloves. The school i go to is in Albuquerque New Mexico. I am a loner, at lunch at lunch I usually get my lunch and go to my usual table. I eat lunch alone because I don't have any friends. After lunch I go to science. I have my table because my class has a uneven number of students.
After school I saw the most beautiful boy that I have ever saw in my life. He was sitting against the lockers. All of sudden a guy came out of no ware. He guy all of a sudden through a punch. Somehow I got over there and caught his punch. I said “I am stronger than you may think so try not to piss me off”.

Comments

[Minda Mist]

Dis is really good. Im a very positive person. But, I mean it. I would pay for this book. (after its finished of course) Yet, you could add more detail.

[WeirdGothicCreepyChick]

no I didnt I havent even reed her books

[Winevy]

Sorry, but this is constructive criticism.
Don't write a book.
And it's obvious this is going to be about vampires, you kinda copied Stephenie Meyer.