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Looking out over the vast sky, the sun begin to melt downwards, as the moon climbed high,
upon the roof sat the pair, as the sun set they began to cry.
But not out of sadness,
Out of love and respect,
For with each other,
Their love grew, and soon the day come that the two were married.
Again they cried, This time for their babies
Victoria and James,
out of joy they watched them grow, and play.
The loving couple watched them sleep, as the sun set, and return to their own little bed.
Then the next morning they got up again, to the sound of their babies. who had again grown.
Now in those terrible teens, and they were always at each other's throats, as mum just smiled shaking her head and daddy joked, making them laugh instead.
The family cared so much for each other, and then the sad days come
for mother and daughter,
Victoria must leave now, into her husband's arms, and daddy sees his little girl all grown up with charms.
This time their tears are mixed together, as mummy and daddy dance, and remember their special day,
and how they truly loved each other, and soon they look upon their son, and Little James, has picked a treasure.
And then one day they cry again, tears of worry and happiness splashed on their faces,
Their daughters are in pain, about to be mothers, and tiny screams of life fill the air calming their mothers, as mummy and daddy now have granddaughters.
And now as the sun sets they lay together, in each other's arms where they stay together, and now draw their final breaths, tears streaming down their faces as they look at each other.
No regrets for their beautiful children, their life well lived and comfortable, they had their fair share of doubts and worries and together they faced them.
As the sun sets.
(For you hon, to proofread , and written for you, sorry it kinda turned in to a poem story.)
Remember honey sunsets can lead to a greater to morrow. *kisses* <3.
- by Animalistic Urges |
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- | Submitted on 02/19/2009 |
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- Title: When the sun sets.
- Artist: Animalistic Urges
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Written by L.M.McCann for bobmccbobertson
proofread by bobmccbobertson.
thanks for your help my love. - Date: 02/19/2009
- Tags: sunset love romance
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- Pandamett - 02/19/2009
- that was really beautiful! i loved it! 5/5
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