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Story one: Part 2
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Now Sanji was awake and the sun rose. He was in the kitchen making breakfast of eggs and bacon, just like any other day. He fixed his plate and sat down at the table alone just sitting there smelling the eggs and bacon but not touching it.
He was remembering the time when he would sit with parents and eat. But they were gone.
Sanji came back to the present and tried to push the thoughts out of his head. He stood and walked away from his food and went upstairs to his room and slowly got dressed.
The high school student, fare skin, dark eyes, walked out of his room and went to the kitchen one more time. He stared at his food, and then deciding not to eat turned around then froze.
A tall thick man in a black cloak and scare on his left cheek was standing there. Sanji new why he was here and took in every detail of the man, his short spiked brown hair, size of the scare and everything else, especially the katana on his back.
“Time to go.” The man said.
“Why don’t you kill me first?” Sanji replied with a straight tone, not a hint of fear in his voice. “Just like you killed my parents?”
“Your parents were suspicious of us. They had to be eliminated. And as for killing you, you are wanted alive.”
“Well, then you’ll have to take me by… FORCE!!” Sanji yelled grabbing a kitchen chair and slinging it at the man. The man raised his arm then brought it down again smashing the chair. Then ran over and elbowing Sanji in the stomach knocking him out. Darkness overtaking his vision….
I woke sitting up fast almost hitting my head on the roof of the dark room.
A dream. How?! I felt like I was there! The pain was so… real. But wait how did I know he was a high school student, and his NAME!!
A sat for a moment starring into blackness, when a bright light came from where I was starring and two figures walked in.
The light of the room came on an I sat staring into Sanji’s face.
“YOU!!!?” I yelled.
“ME!!?” Sanji yelled back.
“I see you two are getting along. Just don’t kill each other.” The tall man with the scar said.
Then he threw Sanji down on the floor of the room and walked over to me. He opened the cage door and said, “Get out.” So I obeyed without hesitation and crawled out of the small cage.
“Remember don’t kill each other.”
“So they have Sanji now too.”
“Seems like it.”
“You know what to do. Send it out.”
“You got it.”
Name: Sanji Toro
Age: 17
Weight: 120
Country: Japan
Status: Missing
- by notAgoodSIGN |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/14/2009 |
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- Title: Stauts: Missing chapter 2
- Artist: notAgoodSIGN
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Description:
I couldn't think of another way to write the way I want to put the story, so it may be kind of confusing but just continue to read and it will probably make since in the end.
And remember I want comments!! (if you would please!)
- Date: 02/14/2009
- Tags: stauts missing chapter
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Nihill - 02/25/2009
- It's a fairly interesting concept, but the spelling errors take away from the whole. Try running it by a friend or beta reader, they could help with that. More description would be nice, too. I'm not saying it's bad, but I think you could do more justice to the idea if you took your time and thought it through more fully.
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- Xiate - 02/16/2009
- This is very interesting. It makes me wonder what will happen next. Please write more!
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