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one good after keven and steve who were fbi wanted to go to a city called ghoul city. it was about 5 mile from were they r standing... they caled susa over to go with them... she agreed ... so they all pack up and steve and keven brought there gun in case ...they drove a bout 3miles and then crash to a tree.
search for doctor 11:39 pm
" this place smell like a dump "said steve "agree" said keven "we have to hurrry and find a doctor for susan so hurry up" THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP!!!! "WHAT WA THAT" whispered steve " "dont know "lets go to the 1st floor" said steve "ok" said keven
1st floor 1:00 pm
holy mother ****** there blood on the floor kevin wat r we going to do " said steve "i i dont know" thud thud thud thud thud thud "who r u i will shoot if u dont tell me........ ohhh iim ...................................................
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- by master minoto |
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- | Submitted on 02/13/2009 |
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- Title: ghost thump and zombie 1
- Artist: master minoto
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2 fbi name keven and steve r going to find a doctor to cure there freind there are 5 part in this but wait for later on ok
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keven leon steve hernadez susan thomas(freind)
mike kuzie(next chapter) - Date: 02/13/2009
- Tags: ghost thump thump
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- meerodi - 02/16/2009
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lol! they ran into a tree!
The story has potential but you should work on some gramical errors. - Report As Spam
- sasori of the red sand 34 - 02/15/2009
- to many misspelled words
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