Story of a sad little girl

• Artist: Sora_Rox12
• Description: This is what i wrote for my English class....it's kinda emo so plz be nice when you read it!.....Tell me what you think plz!!!!!
• Date: 02/05/2009
• Tags: story little girl

Help me! I'm so scared! I don't know what to do. I feel a though I want to fall down deep into the sea and never come up from the comforting embrace of it's cold watery grip. I would love to stay here forever and ever and just love the cold watery embrace. Why does the world have to be so beautiful, but have so many ugly people? It's not fair I have cryed so many times because of the ugly people in this world, it's just not fair. Why can't someone come and save me!?!? Why, please someone come save me please!?!? I now just sit and rest at the bottom of the sea, the very deep sea, and now I can just cry all i want and no one will know. So please remember me as you read this and please know that this was the story of a sad little girl named rinki.

Comments

[Mega Guardian]

Society has never been kind to everyone, not even at one point. It is never the same as it has been years ago.

I'm not saying that everyone is cruel and unknind to everyone they meet, there are nice people out there.

'ugly people'..what would define ugly people?

Looking at the content...it seems that Rinki doesn't want to live in this world any longer than she needs to. Signs of clinical depression are showing.

[Skadi Sundermount]

...is there any particular reason WHY she's so sad? Or how someone so young could have developed this bleak outlook on life and people so early into life? Who or what has caused her such pain and misery?

instead of writing "im sad" try "this makes me sad" or "im sad because" "this is whats wrong with this and why is makes me sad" and so on.