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Ok so this is when it all started. I was getting off my bus, bus 12, and I bumped into the HOTTeST boy in the 10th grade. Ofcourse I was Speechless because I had a crush on this boy since the 4th Grade! So instead of just drooling over this superior being, I finally said " Sorry....I...my.. Lulu.. Name... is..." He just looked at me like I was some creature from planet babble. Then He finally said " No its Ok. I didn't see you there. My nmae is Eric." I smiled so hard that I thought my face was going to melt away! And then he said something that made me want to just pee in my pants. [ In a good way.] " Maybe we should hang out. I'll see you around." I stared at him as he walked away. Gorgeous......
My name is Lulu Yaki. I am 15 yrs old and I am about 5'6ish....
I have dark hair and ummmmm blue eyes { From my mothers side. Yeah because I bet you were wondering" What the HEck is A Japanese person doing with blue eyes?"}. And I live in NewYork. I dunno but I feel awkward having where I live's nickname being A Fruit But hey, Whatever.
I have 1 sister, Miabi, and a Kitten named CoCo. She is all black and has green eyes. My mom's Name is Jennete and my dad's name is Korobi.
School is a nightmare. The guys are drooling animals! ANIMALS! One day, I was walking to 4th period with my friend Sana and this Nerd { yeah I mean Suspenders, glasses, and all baby,} came right up to me and said " You are the Most Beauitfulest Flower I have ever ever seen. Bare me my first child." I know this may seem pretty harsh, but I slapped him!! Yup right across his smugg little face!No one talks to Lulu Like that and gets away with it! And then, I just walked away. Sana was still trying to calm the nerd down. He was pretty worked up.. His nose started bleeding... But yeah, its a Daily for me.
At Burger King one Afternoon, I was eating the greatest salad , since I am a vegetarian, with my best friend Sana and it was pretty quiet. I will tell you one thing, I dont live in a pretty good neighborhood. You have been warned. So anyway we heard door open and 3 men walked in. One had a scar on his left cheek, one was wearing a skull cap, and the other was wearing a chain. I felt a bad feeling that something was going to happen. As we got up to leave, the man with the scar pulled out the gun and said " Dont you take one foot outside or I'm gonna splatter yo pretty face all over the side walk." Ofcourse I sat back down but I was petrified to my bones. Sana looked at me and I noticed her eyes were watering. The men all of a sudden took open fire! Everyone screamed and gun shots were pounding my ear drums. I hid under the table and pulled Sana down with me, but she slipped! As she was getting her balance, a bullet flew towards her and hit her in her stomach. Everything from there on came so much as a rush to me that I didn't know if I was still alive. As Sana fell, she looked at me with her pretty green eyes and Crashed to the Floor. The Men took 3 captives with them and ran outside. It had seemed that the cashier had called 911 and the men knew. I sneaked out the back door with Sana on my back { She was very little. She was 5'1 and weighed about 90 pounds}. I Looked at her, she was soaked with blood. Ipulled out my cellphone and dialed 911. They came in about 4 minutes and had her taken away. The Man said there was a small chance that she was going to make it. But Iknow she was strong. Hang in there Sana,
- Title: Hard Stuff./ Chapter one
- Artist: Ashplease
- Description: This is a Book I am Writing. :] To keep updated on the Chapters, jyst OM me or Comment my page.
- Date: 01/29/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Smashing Heartbeats - 04/12/2009
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Instead of being so casual, maybe you should put in more emotions and descriptions[:
comment and rate me?
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- 290DarkStars - 01/31/2009
- sorry.. it said that my first comment wasnt posted.. then it made me drag it out over 4 comments. and.. uhhh.. i JUST found out that this is fictinal, ups. Well that just goes to show you how silly i am.
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- 290DarkStars - 01/31/2009
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AND...3.) coco is a good name for a cat smile
btw... im NOT a pig WAHH! jk, im not that wimpy - Report As Spam
- 290DarkStars - 01/31/2009
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1.) That nerd should have seen that comeing that b*stard! rotflol
2.)Omg, your 15 like me, this is creepy. - Report As Spam
- 290DarkStars - 01/31/2009
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1.) That nerd should have seen that comeing that b*stard! rotflol
2.)Omg, your 15 like me, this is creepy.
3.) coco is a good name for a cat smile - Report As Spam
- 290DarkStars - 01/31/2009
- wow... the beggining cracked me up! and the ending kinda brot me bac 2 earth. Man, sorry about what happened to you. But besides the ending, i thought that:
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- 290DarkStars - 01/31/2009
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wow... the beggining cracked me up! and the ending kinda brot me bac 2 earth. Man, sorry about what happened to you. But besides the ending, i thought that:
1.) That nerd should have seen that comeing that b*stard! rotflol
2.)Omg, your 15 like me, this is creepy.
3.) coco is a good name for a cat smile
and 4.) IM NOT A DROOLING PIG! WAHHHHH! jk... 5/5... i absalutly love it. - Report As Spam