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Once there was a little girl named Elena. She was the one and only daughter of a baker of Butter bread store. There were many other bakers who lived near Elena's cottage. She used to play with them. One day her father fell very ill and he passed away. She left home in sorrow and ended up in a forest. There she started it all from the very beginning. She loved to sing so she sang and then worked. She gathered wood and sold it in the market. One day when she was gathering wood she heard a manly scream. She ran towards it. Her hair was flipping on her face and branches of trees were smacking her face and leaving slight bruises as she ran. She ran for another 5 minutes when she reached the source of the sound. She reached it and saw a man covered in a blue armor. She went to him and he slowly opened his eyes. When he first saw her he felt a deep impact of warmth inside himself and he slowly fell asleep in her arms. When he woke up he was in a cozy room and as soon as he turned his head he saw a beautiful little girl looking at him through light blue eyes. She looked at him with a curious expression and a warm and welcoming smile. She spoke in the softest voice when she said “who are you?”. The handsome and charming man replied with a “I am the prince of Eleonore”. She quickly went away from him and started to weep in a corner. He got up and went to her. He put her in an embracing hug and smiled at her when she looked into his deep brown, confident eyes. She pulled away from the hug and then she told him who she was. They had a cup of tea and Elena grew more and more comfortable with the prince. His name was Eric, the prince of Eleonore. He had a strong built with light brown hair and a charmingly cute face. He wore a white earring in his left ear. She went out of the cottage and came back with a bunch of flowers and she gave them to the prince and he took them from her and smiled. He came closer to her and held her in his arms. She gave away and fell into his arms. He slowly removed the hair from her face and kissed her. He felt her tender lips quiver and he deepened it. She slowly got lost in the kiss and she fell into a trance. When she snapped out she saw that Erek was still holding her and smiling. She said “why are you doing this?”. Erek stood there, with Elena in her arms. She asked again and then he replied with “i don't know I feel something special with you”. She got up and went to the window. It was beginning to darken. She shut the windows and went and sat opposite to Erek. She felt a tingle of joy inside her and also a tingle of fear. He asked her “what is wrong?”. She told him “nothing, I was just thinking”. “about what?” was his reply. She said “about my land”. “oh!! well where is your land?” said Erek. “i lived in Eleonore but after my fathers death I ran away and came here”. “wait!! you are the daughter of the baker in Butter bread store”. “yes why do you ask?” said Elena. “i came here looking for you” said Erek. “looking for me?”said Elena. “yes! I had to choose a girl to marry and I had seen you in the castle so many times and I really liked you so I choose you but you left so I came here because your neighbors told me you came in this direction” explained Erek. Suddenly Elena stood up and ran towards the door. Erek followed her and she led him deep into the forest. At reaching the center of the forest Elena plopped down on the floor. Her eyes turned red; a deep and violent red. This gave Erek a feeling of fear. He crept towards her. As soon as he reached her he felt a hand on his shoulder. He quickly took out his sword and he came face to face to a blood red face of none other than Elena. He looked at the place where Elena was sitting a minute ago. He was terrified so he crept back. Soon he was enclosed by Elena, or what seemed like her. In a swift moment a white light was spread over the entire place. After the blinding light was faded he looked around and he saw the lifeless body of Elena. He ran over to her and picked her up. Her body was very light. Suddenly Erek felt light headed. He looked at Elena and he felt pain; excruciating pain. He fell down. He felt his body hit the rock hard ground. That was the end of a love story that never had the chance to start.
- by xXx Devil of Darkness xXx |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/26/2009 |
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Ecclipze - 07/19/2010
- I agree and at certain points there were some confusing events that happened.
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- Toxic Saliva - 10/27/2009
- Its called grammar, learn it, study it, rewrite this, revise this, and then repost it when you have corrected almost everything. The good thing is that you have a good plot.
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