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I was sitting on a sidewalk talking to my friend on a Saturday afternoon, while the sun was going
down. I hate the light. I only come outside when the hot rays of sun are fading into night. Suddenly two men broke through the window of a near by gas station falling on the sidewalk across the street. one had a gun in his hand. he wouldn't stop waving it around. He pointed the gun at the other man, he readied the gun to shoot, but just before he pulled the trigger the other man moved his arm in self awareness. The I noticed the gun was pointed at me! I heard a bang, and then it all went black. I saw a very bright light about what seemed to be 5 minutes later. The light was so bright it was blinding. "TAKE ME BACK!TAKE ME BACK!!!" I screamed. And right then I knew I was gone.
- Title: Take Me Back
- Artist: emoetta13
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Description:
I thought of this on the spot I hope you like it!
- Date: 01/14/2009
- Tags: takemeback
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Comments (4 Comments)
- emoetta13 - 04/12/2009
- well the reason its short is i don't like to take the time to read all those long ones and i know that there are other people out there like me. SO... i guess you can say im just lazy!
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- scruffy019 - 01/22/2009
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WONDERFUL GREAT YET SHORT
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- kikisake - 01/15/2009
- A little on the short side, but I liked it. Fast paced and it grabs attention biggrin
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