- A girl that's not capable of love. A girl who broke things special. What kind of things you ask? Cups, plates, vases? No. She broke hearts. She became attached to every boy she met. She had grown to like them, and even love them. But every time, she broke their heart.
- by Tsunami From Hell |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Title: Heartbreaker
- Artist: Tsunami From Hell
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Description:
this is prob the beginning of a story im going to write.
whaddya think?
i know your going to rate but scale
1 - 10
comment and tell me your rating on a scale of 1- 10:D
and if you could tell me if there's something wrong about it or something
:D tyvm! - Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: beginning heartbroken
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Comments (3 Comments)
- fearless_127 - 01/02/2009
- going with last comment
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- Hidden Shadow Love - 01/01/2009
- I rate it 9/10. It's good, but I think should be a tad bit longer and little more descriptive. But I say all in all, you got a great talent for writing!
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- blondecutie1234 - 12/31/2008
- i like it
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