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It was a dark night,a night when things happen.It was on this night that little Tommy, a Phaetonian saw what suprised him most.A rouge planet was approaching Phaeton.
"Hey Mom"Tommy called"I see somthing coming closer to our planet.It's about as big as a moon,grey like a moon, and has black clouds around it."
His mother ran into the room and looked through the telescope.When she looked at Tommy her face was white as the face paint the city's wariors wear to battle.She ran down the stairs without saying a word.When she got downstairs he could hear her telling his father(who just happened to be chief) about the thing in the sky.
"Solomon,its nolonger safe here.We have to leave Phaeton."
"Now Lucy where would we go if we did leave, Mars or Jupiter?"
"I did hear about a planet called Earth that is on the other side of Mars,maybe we can go there."
"There isn't enough fuel left on this planet to travel that far."
Tommy saw his mother say something to his father.He nodded and said he would try.His mother came up the stairs and told him to pack up his things.He took out his bags and packed all of his toys clothes and other stuff that he wanted to take with him.He finished and laid them at the foot of his bed,plopped down and fell asleep.
- Title: The Lost Planet of Phaeton
- Artist: Muste01
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Description:
I was inspired when reading about the myth of Phaeton a planet that was located between Mars and Jupiter that was destroyed when a rouge planet rammed into it creating the atroid belt.
Phaeton:A lost planet
Phaetonian:one who lives on Phaeton
I will continue this story to so if u like it dont worry more is to come.
Part 2 is going to be Tommy's Dream :) - Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: lost planet phaeton
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Just A Passerby - 02/21/2009
- thats cool! where'd you read it from?
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- nickycat123 - 12/31/2008
- luv it ^_^ 5/5 good beginning
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- Muste01 - 12/30/2008
- more comming
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- Muste01 - 12/30/2008
- hope u like it
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- CapnBuBu - 12/30/2008
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