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Falling just falling, how did this happen? My crupled wings curld up aganst my side, my eangy fading how did this happen? All I knew is that i could not wait till I met the cold ground. There was no more treas to cry all the pain when i hit the ground was nothing compared, to the pain i felt right now, i knew i could never die. I was sping out of controll just like my life....heading for a black out soon... with every last bit of streagh I thew my arms out and yelled "freze" the cold rain aorund me stoped the wind in the trees stoped all was still as i sliped into the black aduse to dream...
Meormies of a diffent time
- by Mushroom Reaper |
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- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: Fallen
- Artist: Mushroom Reaper
- Description: about a girl whos hole life changes in the matter of mins and is thrust in to a hole new life (this is the perface where shes thinking things over then she dreams about what happens)
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: fallen
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Comments (3 Comments)
- SDK Manga Girl - 08/14/2010
- well i would give you a 3/5 and u should care about the spelling more. if this was more readable, i would like it more. This is only my opinion =]
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- The Bright Mad Hatter - 12/28/2008
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umm....there's not really much there to vote on, but oh well. I'll give you a 3 outa 5.
it would be nice if you'd watch your spelling and fix anything BEFORE you actually submitted...... - Report As Spam
- Mushroom Reaper - 12/21/2008
- plz vote and leave a coment....
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