- I slowly made my way towards him. I knew in my heart what i would say. Just 3 simply beautiful words. I love you. I watched as he looked in my direction and started to walk towards me. For a second it looked like he was looking past me...He outstretched his arms and had this loving smile on his face that was turning into a kiss. Smiling, I unwound my arms that were folded across my thumping chest. I opened them wide and I closed my eyes happily waiting for him to be here in my arms. But i opened my eyes and to my surprise I saw he had pressed his fine lips against her. That attractive devil. That excuse of a girl. Yet she was one of my best friends..But now i knew i just hated her because he loved her. And yet i felt i knew him better than her...Its turns out he was looking past me...Tears were flooding my face..He has no idea the pain he has been causing me everyday..to see him with her..She just saw a personality when i saw a beautiful soul, a real person..Someone i could easily relate to&someone i can love effortlessly..I loved him with all my heart and he had broken it like i was nothing in his eyes..My love for him meant nothing...
- by AliceCullenOmg |
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- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: Just 3 Words
- Artist: AliceCullenOmg
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Description:
This is about a girl that sees her crush and is happy he is coming her way&to her is about to kiss her, but when she opens her eyes she finds him(the girls crush), kissing her best friend...Her heart was broken </3
I hope you enjoy this piece...Watch for more of my writings!
<33AliceCullenOmg - Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: just words kissing bestfriend love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- greenpanda4222 - 01/27/2011
- omg i loved this even though its so sad it reminds me of Real life smile keep up the great work 5/5
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- Xx-Luna-Kitty-xX - 12/27/2008
- 5/5 i've had something like that happen to me before just not to that degree
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- Arlikie - 12/24/2008
- I cried a river. 5/5
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- Mr Thelma - 12/22/2008
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i love it smile
5/5.
wish i could write like this..
my stories that i entered here now look...bad sad
oh well.
keep it up smile )
i hope you enter more stories in the future!
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- tea-maki-chan - 12/22/2008
- I have been reading tons of horrid stories, grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes, and just plain disgusting stories. But this, THIS, is amazing. Beautiful. Breath-taking, A 'make you want to cry' story... I'm excited about upcoming ideas! Finally! An awesome writer here!
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- Madame_Zelda_ - 12/21/2008
- That's beautiful. I know how she feels. You're an amazing writer, and I look forward to your future short stories.
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