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Once upon a time there is princess name Clara she is so beautiful one day there is a boy he is a slave his name is Josh he saw the princess when he saw the princess he fall in love heart heart
Then one day they saw each other on the fountain then the princess smile at the slave then the slave fainted when his a awake he saw the princess touching his hands then he fainted again when he wakes up again the princess is gone then he start to work again
Then he go to the kingdom he saw the princess again then when he is near he was block by the guards of the princess and the princess walk to the guards and said "i can take it from here " when the guards are away the slave is starting to talk about her dress , her face , and etc. then when the princess is in her royal room she write it on her diary
When the royal family is on vacation the king met a duke a handsome duke smart almost perfect the duke say to the king " O king can i marry your lovely daughter " the king say " Yes you can " then the duke smile badly like he is going to have a bad plan
Now they are on the kingdom again the king say to her daughter " you will get married soon " the princess say " O who " the king say " the duke " then the princess go to her room angry
Now she go to the fountain again crying she saw the slave again she tell about her problem with her life now the slave say "do not worry my princess " then the princess fall in love to the slave
Now the princess will going to marry when they are on the church the duke is now waiting to the princess then there is a message from the duke it say " Please forgive to what i am doing but i do not love you i am not going to marry you forgive me " the duke is crying and walk out to the church and the king got heart attack when hes on the bed with the doctor the doctor say " im sorry to tell but he do not make it "
And the slave and the princess live happily ever after THE END
- by LiL_ScReaMo_Dude |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/19/2008 |
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- Title: The Princess and the slave
- Artist: LiL_ScReaMo_Dude
- Description: ok this is my invention
- Date: 12/19/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- SouI Zero - 03/05/2011
- It's not a bad story, but you need to work on your grammar. Some of it doesn't make much sense. 2/5
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- Reenie Rules - 07/19/2009
- well there's never really a perfect fairy tale...
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- coming_ruler - 12/21/2008
- COOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLL
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- Loyal2-1 - 12/20/2008
- *sigh* Where to begin. It rambles, it's short, the grammar is far from perfect, but not close to the worst I've ever seen. All in all, this is a sub-par piece. 2/5.
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- deadly_ruler123 - 12/19/2008
- u r a genius dude
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