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When she left a part of him died, she had walked away without a second thought… it seemed… his heart shuddered… and he only kept his gaze were she had stood, were they were happy… what went wrong? They were the puzzle pieces to fit but maybe not, nothing could stand between them or so it was…now she just so easily walks away? Without a tear to shead? This clearly was not his love the girl that had said no matter what you’re in my heart! She was happy with him… but then she disappeared for a month! And when she came back she was pail… saddened even her voice had changed! It had the sound of a harp that only angels could play, yet so much pain that hell could not give out? What had happened to her? He wondered he had to know! This was the very meaning of his existence and she just walked away? Crawling up, he herd voiced so far and pressure on his arms, he blinked… suddenly back in reality to find Nattily (his cousin) shaking his arms screaming his name demanding if he was okay, questioning what had happened… worried if they would have to take him to a shrink or hospital…
“I’m fine” he tried to say but all that came out was a crumbled little cry saying “okay” it was just in that moment her faced popped back into his mind it was set, sad… and hurt ‘I can’t do this… if I hurt you I would never be able to live’ she blinked ‘never but forever… I have to leave I’m sorry’ by this point her face was stern and promising… with that she turned and left… a sob unleashed its self as he curled into Nattily’s arms
“It’s alright… it was the girl wasn’t it” Nattily’s face was so furious that a thick cloud of hate spread over her eyes “Tell me the truth it was … Midnight wasn’t it? You love her and she hurts you! I know you better than anyone, and you, I. Jasper I love you I do… and you love her… I’ll kill her!” Jasper shook his head in her arms
“I don’t know why but something told me she did what she did, for reasons and it hurt her as worse than anything hell could throw at her… one thing I don’t get she said ‘if I hurt you I would never be able to live, never but forever’ do you have any idea what that could mean?”
Suddenly as if she was hit her face was paler then normal… her gentle demanding voice was different “did she look, sound, smell any different? Then what she did?” Nattily didn’t bother hiding her concern…
“Yeah… she was pretty, very pretty. More pretty then when I saw her last month but I rather my old Midnight not who ever that was…” his voice cracked “ Nattily I don’t know how to say this but u have to believe me… that wasn’t my Midnight” she nodded to his surprise! “You mean you believe me?!” She nodded again she focused on the words he was saying…
“Jasper… don’t think I’m crazy now but… Midnight, is a Vampire just like I, please believe me and not be scared, Jazz you know if I ever joke about this at such a time!” he paled could this be plausible? How long had it taken her to become a vampire… if I ever hurt you I would never be able to live, never but forever… her everything was different… it wasn’t his midnight it was already hell’s midnight… that means she still loved him! “Are you okay with this, wait you do believe me right?!” he nodded “What’s happening in your mind? I mean common what are you thinking?”
“It’s possible then, that she still does love me?!” Nattily thought then nodded sternly “Why did you hide this from me? For how long?!”
“We come from to different parents remember… our mothers are sisters. Well my father is a vampire, and well when I was developing he turned my mother, so basically I’ve hide this from everyone my whole life… and I couldn’t make any exceptions. But now you know… I’m sorry, I don’t like hiding it from you… truly I don’t, neither does mother” she continued to blab on…
Jasper couldn’t stop thinking ‘he turned her’ does this mean she could turn him
heart tell me wut u think
- by XxMidnights Vampirexx |
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- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Why, What, Wait
- Artist: XxMidnights Vampirexx
- Description: im thinking of this story this is all i have so far i think its kinda good but u may not lyke it... im not much of a writer altho mi teachers always say i am... tel me if i should continue on this....! (its just one chapter and thats were it leaves off!)
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: wait what confuesed love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- BookWurm21 - 01/09/2009
- i think you should keep writing
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- smartychick15 - 12/26/2008
- it's really good or wonderful. however you want to put it. it's really dramatic and best selling books(i think)>.< are dramatic. continue
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- panda luver745 - 12/17/2008
- it suckes this make my teacher fall asleep hope you take it off cause it suckes so bad >.< i puked when i red this
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- InZane Blue - 12/14/2008
- O_O make a book sell it and call it The Depression
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- xXxVynn_Vampire_10_10xXx - 12/14/2008
- I loves it nee-chan!! <33
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- XxMidnights Vampirexx - 12/14/2008
- thank you so much x 3
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- bonecruncher1231 - 12/14/2008
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YOU SHOULD DO THE SECOND CHAPTER
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