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I never thought a day would come when i felt an emoution for someone other then myself. My feet pounded the hard ground calling her name, the girl that wouldnt let me think like a little boy, the girl that in her deep blue eyes told stories of rage.
the girl i'm risking my very freedom for.
"Autuam!" I called loudly but my voice just became an echo in the darkness.
i ran faster as my bare feet begain to numb with the snow that made eeryone of my steps icey.
"Autuam!" I called but the echo of ignorance jsut shoot back into my ears, telling me my effort was worthless, I was just wasting my breath.
i stopped running, my feet numbed not feeling the frozen ground under them. Tears were fluttering down my eyes, for the first time in my life, crying, and it wasn't because I was feeling sorry for my failed and worthless efforts.
these tears i dropped were for her.
my crying was inturrebed when bright headlights shined into my acid green eyes, blinding my city.
I shallowed hard, turned around and tried running, but slipped and knocked myself unconscious.
that was when my days of running and being free........ended
- by xXSlayingTheDreamerxX |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: preface: shads of darkness
- Artist: xXSlayingTheDreamerxX
- Description: this is the preface to my own story called the ice doll the story of a run away girl who gets taken in and is joined with normal socialty but she has many problums: one: she doesnt know how a normal girl is supposed to act and two she doesnt understand her own emoutions, so how will she find her understanding? will she even fit in? and is she in love?
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: doll runaway frozen
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Shiromaku_xoxo - 06/06/2009
- It's like a marrie go round! it going to fast!
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- Ai Kinomoto - 12/21/2008
- its wondreful! ha but i already know what happens unlike YOU people! read it over before u submit it tho.... i get the feeling you were typing it really fast. anywho.... guess where i am! in a high tech lab thingy! my mommy is lookin' at da cancer cell an' it's REAL borin' so i'm on gaia!
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- XxsexysonadowloverxX - 11/28/2008
- a great beginning but you might want to take a look at your spelling ^^
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- moonlitstream - 11/26/2008
- not the best spelling which is a bad thing..
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- f l e u r p o l i e - 11/26/2008
- Its a fine story for when you feel let a idk how to discrive it
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